《2025年全效学习学业评价方案八年级英语上册人教版》

技法点拨
“读万卷书，行万里路”。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在举行征文比赛，主题是“A Wonderful Trip”。请你根据以下信息写一篇英语短文参加比赛。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80左右。
Step 1审——审清题意
1. 文体：记叙文。
2. 人称：第一人称。
3. 时态：一般过去时。

4. 内容：一次精彩的旅行。
Step 2 搭——搭好框架

Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. It ____ (花费)us about two hours to fly to Beijing.
2. 主体内容：
There are ____ (很多名胜古迹) in Beijing. First，we visited the Great Wall. The natural beauty is amazing. Then we went to visit the Palace Museum. We saw so many beautiful ____ (艺术作品). Next，we enjoyed delicious Beijing roast duck. Besides，we went shopping and bought some special gifts.
3. 总结收尾：
By travelling，we can relax and ____ (学习一些新的东西). This trip was unforgettable，and I ____ (迫不及待地) go there again.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
A Wonderful Trip
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. It took us about two hours to fly to Beijing.
There are many places of interest in Beijing. First，①we visited the Great Wall. The natural beauty is amazing. Then we went to visit the Palace Museum. We saw so many beautiful artworks. Next，②we enjoyed delicious Beijing roast duck. Besides，we went shopping and bought some special gifts.
③By travelling，we can relax and learn something new. This trip was unforgettable，and I can't wait to go there again.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 在①处运用定语从句，并补充细节信息：
____
2. 在②处补充细节描写：
____
3. 在③处运用 not only... but also... 并列信息，并适当补充细节信息：
____

答案： Step 3
1. took 2. many places of interest; artworks 3. learn something new; can’t wait to
Step 5
1. we paid a visit to the Great Wall, where the natural beauty is really amazing.
2. we enjoyed delicious Beijing roast duck and other local foods at a famous restaurant.
3. By travelling, we can not only relax and make new friends but also learn something new.