《2025年金版新学案高中英语选择性必修第一册》

读后续写——家庭生活类
（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._______
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._______
一、一审要素

二、二定主题
theme（正能量原则）To celebrate Mother's Day, the twins want to cook for their mother to show their love for their mother.
三、三巧构思
每段三个微情节，注重衔接和冲突解决
第一段首句：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Q1：What is the role of their father?
Answer：1._______
Q2：What problems did the father focus on helping his children solve?
Answer：2._______
Q3：What is the final result?
Answer：3._______
第二段首句：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Q1：What was their mother's reaction to seeing the breakfast?
Answer：4._______
Q2：What's the point of breakfast?
Answer：5._______
Q3：What did the children say to their mother?
Answer：6._______
四、四造词句
1. 父亲帮助他们调整了火，这是成功的关键。（which 引导非限制性定语从句）
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2. 这不仅是早餐，还是孩子们对她的爱，使她非常感动。[固定短语 not only...but (also) 和强调句型]
_______
3. 当他们的母亲看到她面前的美味且完美的早餐时，她感到非常惊讶。（when 引导时间状语从句）
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五、五塑成文
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答案： 三巧构思
1.Father helped the twins with the cooking task.
2.Father helped them adjust the fire.
3.Three people have successfully made the breakfast meal.
4.Mother was very surprised.
5.This was not only a gift but also the children’s love for their mother.
6.Happy Mother’s Day.
四造词句
1.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.
2.It was not only the breakfast,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.
3.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.
五塑成文
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their father,they took positive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.It was all right this time.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the breakfast,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn’t expect.The children said loudly,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.