《2025年名校课堂八年级英语上册冀教版》

写作练笔
假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim 想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列要点提示，用英语写一封邮件向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。
要点提示：
1. 长度：约 505 千米
2. 深度：约 6 千米(最深处)
3. 美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum；动物王国 the animal kingdom
4. 最佳旅游时间：春季和夏季
写作要求：
1. 字迹端正，书写正确，成文连贯，注意单词的大小写和标点符号；
2. 词数不少于 80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
【审题指导】
1. 定主题：介绍自然景观
2. 定文体：应用文
3. 定人称：第一人称和第三人称
4. 定时态：以一般现在时为主
【思路点拨】
(温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲)

【小试身手】
Dear Tim，
I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon. It's in Xizang, China. And it is the deepest canyon in the world, about 505 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometres. As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. It's called "the plant museum" and "the animal kingdom". The best time to visit it is spring and summer. I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours，
Wang Haoyu

答案： 【审题指导】1. 介绍自然景观 2. 应用文 3. 第一人称和第三人称 4. 以一般现在时为主 【思路点拨】Height and depth: It is about 505 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometres. Reputation: It's called "the plant museum" and "the animal kingdom". Travel time: The best time to visit it is spring and summer. 【小试身手】One possible version: Dear Tim, I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China-the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon. It's in Xizang, China. And it is the deepest canyon in the world, about 505 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometres. As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. It's called "the plant museum" and "the animal kingdom". The best time to visit it is spring and summer. I'm sure you will have a great time there. Yours, Wang Haoyu