《2025年名校课堂九年级英语上册人教版湖南专版》

进入初中后，你发现自己在生活和学习能力上都有了很大的提升，变得越来越独立了，这与父母及老师对你的帮助是分不开的。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，在下周的英语课上分享父母和老师是如何帮助你的。
参考词汇:confident 自信的
▶▶审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
4.写作要点:①父母和老师给了我什么帮助；②我取得了哪些进步
▶▶思路点拨

答案： ▶▶范文赏析
12分作文长这样
Since I entered middle school, I’ve become more independent both in study and in life. I’d like to share how I’ve changed.
At home, ①I was a lazy and untidy girl before. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, ②they always say something good to me. ③I become more hard-working and confident because they encourage me a lot. These changes have a great influence on my life. ④Now I can take good care of myself.
At school, English used to be a headache to me. ⑤My teachers showed me different useful learning methods. They also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. That’s why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone. ⑥They help me do better than before.
Thanks to my teachers and parents, my life has changed a lot. I can’t fully express my thanks for their help!
我想要15分作文 ①I used to be a lazy and untidy girl ②they always tell me that they take pride in me ③The more they encourage me,the more hard-working and confident I become. ④Now I am able to take good care of myself. ⑤ My teachers not only showed me different useful learning methods,but also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. ⑥With their help,I did better than before.