《2025年优化探究同步导学案英语选择性必修第三册》

典题尝试
　　读了本单元提供的两篇航海备忘录后,请你写一篇关于沙克尔顿团队南极探险的故事评论。
[审题谋篇]
第一步　明确要求
　　该写作属于故事评论,故要用______人称来写,时态以______________为主。
第二步　确定段落
　　第一段:简单介绍故事;
　　第二段:介绍这个故事的主要内容、情节、主要人物等;
　　第三段:自己的印象和感受。
第三步　提炼要点
1.________________登上船
2.________________被困在了冰里
3.________________丢弃这艘船
4.________________做出承诺/愿意或决定做某事
5.________________陷入恐慌
6.________________设法生存下来
7.________________被……深深地感动
8.________________面对困难
9.________________从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课
10.________________放弃
第四步　句式升级
1. Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship. The ship is named Endurance. (一般表达)
　→______________________________(分词作定语合并为一句,高级表达)
2. Unfortunately, on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice and sank into the ocean. (一般表达)
　→Unfortunately, on the way________________.(分词短语作结果状语,高级表达)
3. After they abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island. (一般表达)
　→______________________________.(现在分词短语作状语,高级表达)

答案： 第一步
时态：一般过去时
第三步
1.go aboard the ship　2.be/become stuck in the ice　3.abandon the ship　4.make a commitment to do sth.　5.get into a panic　6.manage to survive　7.be deeply moved by...　8.in face of difficulties　9.learn an important lesson from the inspiring story　10.give up
第四步
1.Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.
2.Endurance became stuck in the ice, sinking into the ocean.
3.Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.