《2025年名校课堂八年级英语下册人教版安徽专版》

我想要20分作文

答案： ①As we know;②First of all;③it’s better to play sports at least one hour every day;④Enough exercise not only makes us stronger but also helps us relax. ;⑤What’s more;⑥Be happy as possible as we can.

(2023−2024.蚌埠市高新区期中)假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你刚刚得知你的英国笔友贝蒂(Betty)因经常熬夜而导致睡眠不足、抵抗力下降，继而生病住院。请你根据以下内容提示，给她写一封邮件表示关心，并针对其病因给出你的一些建议。
提示:
1. 不要熬夜，要早睡早起;
2. 不要把自己逼得太紧，健康更重要;
3. ……
要求:
1. 邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100(邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
审题指导
1. 文体:____________
2. 人称:__________________________
3. 时态:________________
4. 写作要点:①________________________;②____。
思路点拨

小试身手
Dear Betty,
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

答案： 审题指导
1. 应用文 2. 第一人称和第二人称 3. 一般现在时 4. ①表达对Betty的关心;②针对Betty的病因提出一些建议
思路点拨
Beginning:I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill in hospital. How are you feeling now?
Body:Go to bed early and get up early;Stop pushing yourself too hard;go for a walk in your free time...
Ending:I hope you’ll get better soon. Please let me know if you need anything.
小试身手
One possible version:
Dear Betty,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill in hospital. How are you feeling now?
I know you often stay up late at night,and you don’t get enough sleep. I don’t think you should do that anymore. Go to bed early and get up early. Health is more important than anything else. Stop pushing yourself too hard. Why don’t you go for a walk in your free time or watch a movie on weekends? That will take your mind off school.
I hope you’ll get better soon. Please let me know if you need anything.
Yours,
Li Hua