《2025年成才之路高中新课程学习指导高中英语必修第三册人教版》

Section Ⅳ 写作指导
Ⅰ 演练佳作
A peacock(孔雀) was very unhappy with her ugly voice, so she spent most of her days complaining about it.
"It is true that you cannot sing," said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"
"Oh, but what good is all this beauty," cried the peacock, "with such an unpleasant voice!"
"Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: you have such beauty; the nightingale(夜莺) has her songs; and the owl(猫头鹰) has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got?"
请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题,写一篇80词左右的英文读后感。内容包括：
1. 简要概括这则寓言；
2. 谈谈你的理解或感受；
3. 以你或你身边的人或事加以论证。
Ⅱ 写作步骤
一、审题谋篇
体裁：议论文——寓言故事评论
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
文章结构：
第一段：寓言简介；
第二段：得到的启示；
第三段：举例论证并总结观点。
二、要点陈述
1.这则寓言讲的是一只孔雀抱怨自己的声音太难听,忽视了自己真正的美丽。
The fable is about a peacock whocomplains about her ugly voice and ignores her true beauty.
2.但是一只狐狸建议她满足于她所拥有的。
But a fox advises her tobe content with what she owns.
3.他各科成绩都很好,在大多数考试中都名列前十。
Hedoes very well in all subjects, and ranks as Top 10 in most of the exams.
4.他永远也不会知道我们是多么钦佩他！事实上,没有人能在各个方面都发展得很好,即使他/她是人才。
He will never know how much we admire him! In fact, nobody can develop very well in all aspectseven if he/she is a talent.
三、句式升级
1.将第1句用分词改写。
The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice,ignoring her true beauty.
2.将第2句用宾语从句改写。
But a fox advises that she be content with what she owns.
3.将第3句用分词改写。
He does very well in all subjects,ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams.
4.将第4句用倒装句改写。
Never will he know how much we admire him! In fact,nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent.
四、连句成篇
参考范文：
The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice,ignoring her true beauty. But a fox advises that she be content with what she owns.
After reading it,I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages,stopping complaining about the shortcomings all the time.
Many people around me make the same mistake,who only focus on what they cannot get.Take my friend Mike as an example.He does very well in all subjects,ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams.But he usually complains that he can't play basketball well.Never will he know how much we admire him! In fact,nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent.So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much.

答案： Ⅱ. 二、1.complains about 2.be content with 3.does very well in 4.even if he/she is a talent
三、1.The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice,ignoring her true beauty. 2.But a fox advises that she be content with what she owns. 3.He does very well in all subjects,ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams. 4.Never will he know how much we admire him! In fact,nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent.
四、参考范文：
The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice,ignoring her true beauty. But a fox advises that she be content with what she owns.
After reading it,I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages,stopping complaining about the shortcomings all the time.
Many people around me make the same mistake,who only focus on what they cannot get.Take my friend Mike as an example.He does very well in all subjects,ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams.But he usually complains that he can't play basketball well.Never will he know how much we admire him! In fact,nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent.So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much.