《2025年名校课堂九年级英语下册人教版安徽专版》

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How We Make Our Environment More Beautiful
The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment.
① First, we should develop good living habits. For example, we mustn't throw away rubbish everywhere. Sort the rubbish before throwing. ② Second, ③ we should turn off the lights when we leave the room. It can save the energy. We'd better turn off the taps when we brush our teeth. ④Third, walk or ride a bike to school. ⑤ Don't take a taxi or drive a car. ⑥Finally, we can save water by reusing it. For example, when my mother finishes washing the clothes, she uses the water to clean the floor. ⑦She often uses reusable bags to go shopping.
⑧In a word, we should protect the environment. I believe that if everyone ⑨does a little, the world will become better and better.
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How We Make Our Environment More Beautiful
The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment.
① ______________（首先）, we should develop good living habits. For example, we mustn't throw away rubbish everywhere. Sort the rubbish before throwing. ② ____________（除此之外）, ③ ______________ ______________（更重要的是）. We'd better turn off the taps when we brush our teeth. ④ ______________（更重要的是）, walk or ride a bike to school ⑤ ______________（而不是） taking a taxi or driving a car. ⑥ ______________（最后但同样重要的是）, we can save water by reusing it. For example, when my mother finishes washing the clothes, she uses the water to clean the floor. ⑦ ______________
⑧ ______________ I believe that if everyone ⑨ ______________（参与其中） it, the world will become better and better.
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技巧一：巧用衔接词升格①②④⑥
技巧二：用 in order to do 结构升格③
技巧三：用短语升格⑤⑨
技巧四：动名词短语作主语升格⑦
技巧五：用 it's our duty ... 句型升格⑧

答案： First of all@@Besides@@we should turn off the lights when we leave the room in order to save the energy@@What’s more@@instead of@@Last but not least@@Reusing bags when shopping is another way to reduce waste.@@It’s our duty to protect the environment.@@takes part in