《2025年名校课堂九年级英语下册人教版安徽专版》

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Smiles
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. ①It helps us get on well with each other. It can also bring us good luck.
②When I was a young boy, I was very shy and I couldn’t speak in public places. One day, I was asked to give a speech in class. I was so nervous that I did badly at the beginning. My Chinese teacher Mrs. Gu encouraged me to believe in myself. When I saw the smile on my teacher’s face, I got ③much confidence. Finally I made it.
Smiles are very helpful in our lives. ④Smile more and you’ll look much younger. So let’s try to smile more.
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Smiles
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts. ①______________________________
②______________________________ One day, I was asked to give a speech in class. I was so nervous that I did badly at the beginning. My Chinese teacher Mrs. Gu encouraged me to believe in myself. When I saw the smile on my teacher’s face, I got ③____________________（越来越多的）confidence. I won the first prize at last because of her encouraging smile.
Smiles are very helpful in our lives. ④______________________________ So let’s try to smile more.
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答案： A person who often smiles usually gets good luck and gets on well with others.@@When I was a young boy, I was too shy to speak in public places.@@more and more@@As the saying goes, “A smile makes you ten years younger.”