《2025年名校课堂九年级英语下册人教版安徽专版》

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12分作文长这样
When in China，Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people. In China，the table manners are different from your country in many ways.
①First，when you eat dinner with others，②you should wait for the old to begin eating first. Second，pointing at others with chopsticks is impolite. ③Third，if you are invited，arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. By the way，④you can't give a clock to your friends as a present when you visit them. Because it means “death” in Chinese. ⑤At last，you can help to clear the table to express your respect and politeness.
When in China，eat as we Chinese eat! ⑥We Chinese people are very hospitable and we will go out of our way to make you feel at home. Have a good trip in China!
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我想要20分作文
When in China，Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people. In China，the table manners are different from your country in many ways.
①__________（首先），when you eat dinner with others，②______________________________. Secondly，you'd better not point at others with chopsticks，which is impolite. ③__________（此外），if you are invited，arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. By the way，④______________________________，which means “death” in Chinese. ⑤__________（另外），you can help to clear the table to express your respect and politeness.
⑦__________（总之），when in China，eat as we Chinese eat! ⑥______________________________ Have a good trip in China!
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|技巧一：巧用衔接词升格①③⑤⑦|
|技巧二：用it's better to do句型升格②|
|技巧三：用be expected to do结构升格④|
|技巧四：用so...that...结构升格⑥|

答案： First of all@@it’s better to wait for the old to begin eating first@@Moreover@@you are not expected to give a clock to your friends as a present when you visit them@@Besides@@In a word@@We Chinese people are so hospitable that we will go out of our way to make you feel at home.

04 践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a Student with Good Manners”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 简述你见过的文明或者不文明行为；
2. 你对该行为的看法或感受；
3. 你该如何成为一名讲文明的学生。
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体：__________
2. 人称：第__________人称
3. 时态：__________
4. 写作要点：①__________；②__________；③__________
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|小试身手|
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|Be a Student with Good Manners|
|It's of great importance to be a student with good manners in our daily lives.|
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|______________________________|
|______________________________|
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答案： 夹叙夹议@@一、三@@一般现在时和一般过去时@@见到的文明或者不文明的行为@@如何看待这类行为@@如何做一名有素质、讲文明的学生@@Last Monday morning, I went to school with my classmate Li Xin by bus. The bus was full of people so that there weren’t enough seats for the passengers. When an old woman got on the bus at the next stop, Li Xin stood up at once and gave her seat to the old and weak lady. The old woman thanked Li Xin for her kindness. People on the bus spoke highly of her. I was deeply moved by her behavior and I decided to learn from her.@@As a student, we should form the habit of being polite and helpful. As the saying goes, “Politeness costs nothing but wins everything.” We should always be ready to give a helping hand when we see someone in need.