《2025年云南省标准教辅优佳学案七年级英语上册人教版》

1. 写作任务
假如你是张彬,请用一张全家福向同学介绍你的家人。请你根据下图中的内容提示,以“My Family”为题用英语写一篇不少于60个词的短文。

写作要求:(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展；
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁:记叙文 人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲

第三步:句子积累
开头句:
This is/Here is a photo of my family. 这是/里有一张我的家庭照片。
中间句:
(1)My father is on the left. 我的爸爸在左边。
(2)Next to him is my mum. 挨着他的是我的妈妈。
(3)My grandparents are in the middle. 我的祖父母在中间。
(4)She always reads me stories at night. 她总是在晚上给我读故事。
(5)He likes playing ping-pong a lot. 他非常喜欢打乒乓球。
(6)I'm quiet, and I like reading. 我很安静,并且我喜欢阅读。
(7)He is a funny man, and he often makes us laugh. 他是个有趣的人,他经常让我们发笑。
结尾句:
(1)What a happy family! 多么幸福的一个家庭啊!
(2)I love my family. 我爱我家。
名言名句:
(1)There's no place like home. 千好万好,家里最好。
(2)Home is where the heart is. 家是心灵所在。
3. 范文品鉴
My Family
I'm Zhang Bin. This is a photo of my family. I have a small family and there are four people in my family. (引出主题)
The old woman is my grandma. She is a kind woman and she likes cooking. My father is on the left. He is a funny man and he often makes us laugh. He likes swimming. My mother is on the right. She is a happy woman. She likes music. The thin boy is me. I'm quiet and I like reading. We often watch TV at night together. We always have much fun. (介绍家庭成员的性格、爱好和家庭活动)
What a happy family! I love it. There's no place like home. (呈现主题意义,评价和表达爱)

答案： 思路点拨
- 第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
- 第二步：列提纲
开篇：引出主题
This is a photo of my family. I have a small family.
正文：介绍家庭成员的位置、性格、爱好和家庭活动
1. The old woman is my grandma. She is kind and she likes cooking.
2. My father is on the left. He is funny. He likes swimming.
3. My mother is on the right. She is happy. She likes music.
4. The thin boy is me. I'm quiet and I like reading.
5. We often watch TV together. We always have much fun.
结尾：评价和表达对家人的爱
What a happy family! I love it.
- 第三步：句子积累
开头句：This is/Here is a photo of my family.
中间句：
(1) My father is on the left.
(2) Next to him is my mum.
(3) My grandparents are in the middle.
(4) She always reads me stories at night.
(5) He likes playing ping - pong a lot.
(7) He is a funny man, and he often makes us laugh.
结尾句：
(1) What a happy family!
(2) I love my family.