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运动记事
探究技法
:运动记事是用来记录你所经历过的运动
赛事的一种文体。一般要注意以下几点:
1.规范的格式:一般分三段进行阐述。
第一段简单介绍背景，第二段阐述你的所见
所闻，第三段表明你的态度以及所受到的
启发。
2.正确的人称:该文体是对运动赛事的记
录，讲述他人参加比赛的趣事以及自己所受到
的启发，因此多用第一人称和第三人称。
3.正确的时态:该文体是对比赛当天的回
忆性记录，因此多用一般过去时。
探究题目
今年10月你所在的城市举办了马拉松比
赛，你有幸观看了比赛，请就你的所见所闻写
一篇运动记事。内容包括:
1.对比赛的简单介绍;
2.你的所见所闻;
3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:马拉松 marathon
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探究思路
第一步:确定文体−−记叙文
第二步:确定人称、时态和段落
①人称:第一人称;
②时态:以一般过去时为主;
③段落:三段。
第三步:确定简要要点
(首段)简单介绍你们城市马拉松比赛的情况;
(正文)记叙在马拉松比赛中给你印象最深
的事;
(尾段)表达你的感受和比赛对你的启发。
尝试初写
[写词块，转换表达方式]

项目 表达方式1 表达方式2
参加 take part in ________
尽力做某事 try to do ________
[补要点，写长、短佳句]
① On October 10 th,the events of marathon
participate in(在我们城市举办).
② It helped to spare no effort to do(为我们
的城市注入了活力).
③用 which 引导的定语从句连接①②句
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④On arriving there(一到那里),I saw so
many players warming up for the match.
⑤ However, (最令
我惊讶的是)was that they didn't run very
fast at first.
⑥ The perseverance and bravery helped the
players to achieve success in the event.
用强调句型改写⑥句
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[巧衔接，成高分作文]
On October 10 th, the events of
marathon were held in our city,which added
vigor into our city..
In the morning,I got up early to watch
the events with eagerness.On arriving there,
I saw so many athletes warming up for the
match.It looked as if they were full of energy
and passion.When they started out,they
spared no effort to reach the finish line.
However,what amazed me most was that
they didn't run very fast at first.It turned out
that they needed control their pace when they
were running.Nearly three hours later,the
first athlete got to the finish line.He was
quite thin and a little short,but he finished
such a difficult task with great passion.
It was the perseverance and bravery that
helped the athletes achieve success in the
event.I was determined to join the marathon
next year.

答案： 写作研习课 【写词块,转换表达方式】 participate in; spare no effort to do 【补要点,写长、短佳句】 ①were held in our city ②add vigor into our city ③On October 10th, the events of marathon were held in our city, which added vigor into our city. ④On arriving there ⑤what amazed me most ⑦It was the perseverance and bravery that helped the athletes achieve success in the event.