《2025年同步练习册山东人民出版社高中英语选择性必修第一册外研版》

本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙
文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的
故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故
事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记
叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、
经过和结果)交代清楚。
一、基本结构
1.开头一−交代清楚事件的背景。
2.主体一主要叙述事件的发生、经过及
结果。
3.结尾一−呼应主题，发表感想、愿望等。
二、注意事项
1.标题:如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事
件或主题。
2.人称:通常用第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在
描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这
样显得更加生动形象。
探究题目
假如你是李华，请你就自己克服恐高症
(a cro phobia)的过程，写一篇英语短文，要点
如下:
1.自己有恐高症;
2.一次经历;
3.自己的感悟。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________
______________________________
探究思路
第一步:确定文体−记叙文
第二步:确定人称、时态和段落
①人称:第一人称;
②时态:一般过去时;
③段落:三段。
第三步:确定简要要点
(首段)自己有恐高症;
(正文)记叙一次经历;
(尾段)自己的感悟。
尝试初写
[写词块，转换表达方式]

项目 表达方式1 表达方式2
不知不觉中 without feeling 转移注意力 move one's attention出乎意料的结果 strange results
[补要点，写长、短佳句]
① I had a cro phobia(恐高症)for many years
(多年来).
② I was afraid to
(爬上高的地方).
③用 so that 连接①②句
_
④ My classmates climbed up to mountains
(爬山)happily.
⑤ I only watched them with some disappointment
(带着一些失望).
⑥用 everytime 连接④⑤句
______________________________⑦ A few days ago,I ________________________
went to climb a mountain(去爬山)with some kids.
⑧ I was afraid that the children would be __________________(处于危险中).
⑨ Slowly,I forgot my fear of heights(恐
高).
@ I got to the top of(…....的顶部)
the mountain.
⑪Isuddenly realised that(突然意识到)I had overcome my fear of heights.
⑫用 when 连接⑩⑪句
_
⑬ I think we can shift our attention(转移
我们的注意力).
⑭ Maybe things will have unexpected results(有意想不到的结果).
[巧衔接，成高分作文]
I had a cro phobia for many years so that I was afraid to climb to the high place.Everytime my classmates climbed up to mountains happily,
I only watched them with some disappointment.
A few days ago,I went to climb a mountain with some kids.I was afraid that the children would be in danger.Slowly,I forgot my fear of heights while I was looking after thechildren.Beforeweknewit,we
reached the top of the mountain.When I got
to the top of the mountain, I suddenly
realised that I had overcome my fear of
heights.
From this matter,I think we can shift our
attention when we want to overcome some
difficulties.Maybe things will have unexpected
results.

答案： 4.1.①was he able to make himself heard
②did I know ③was she allowed
2.①I were her own son ②had been