《2025年全效学习同步学练测九年级英语全一册人教版》

技法点拨
假如你叫王鹏，在日常生活中有许多爱好。请根据要点提示，给你的笔友 Tom 写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 你刚刚考试完，很高兴有时间给他写邮件并谈谈你的爱好；
2. 你喜欢轻柔、舒缓的音乐并说明理由；
3. 你喜欢健身，每天都坚持做运动；
4. 你喜欢读科普类的书籍并说明理由。
要求：
1. 思路清晰，条理清楚；
2. 80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom，
I have just finished the exams!
Yours，
Wang Peng
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体：应用文。
2. 人称：第一人称。
3. 时态：一般现在时。
4. 内容：介绍“自己的爱好”。
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架

 
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
I'm happy to write to you aboutmy hobbies（我的爱好）.
2. 主体内容：
I enjoy music that isquiet and slow（安静且缓慢）. This kind of music can make me feel relaxed andset me free（让我放松）. I want to build up my body and keep healthy. I do sports every day. I like books about popular science. I think popular science books are interesting and give me somethingthinktoabout（思考）. I'm sure I canlearn much from（从……学到很多） reading them.
3. 总结收尾：
These are my hobbies. （你的呢）? Can you tell me?What about yours
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Dear Tom，
I have just finished the exams! I'm happy to write to you about my hobbies.
①I enjoy music that is quiet and slow. This kind of music can make me feel relaxed and set me free. ②I want to build up my body and keep healthy. I do sports every day. ③I like books about popular science. I think popular science books are interesting and give me something to think about. I'm sure I can learn much from reading them.
These are my hobbies. ④What  about  yours? Can  you  tell  me?
Yours，
Wang Peng
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 将①改为由 which 引导的非限制性定语从句：I enjoy music that is quiet and slow, which can make me feel relaxed and set me free.
2. 将②改为含有动词不定式短语作目的状语的句子：I do sports every day to build up my body and keep healthy.
3. 将③改为含有 prefer 的定语从句：I prefer books that/which are about popular science.
4. 将④改为宾语从句：Can you tell me what your hobbies are?

答案： Step 3 1. my hobbies 2. quiet and slow set me free think about learn much from 3. What about yours Step 5 1. I enjoy music that is quiet and slow, which can make me feel relaxed and set me free. 2. I do sports every day to build up my body and keep healthy. 3. I prefer books that/which are about popular science. 4. Can you tell me what your hobbies are?