《2025年绩优课堂高效提升满分备考九年级英语上册冀教版》

单元写作素材
本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“灾害防范”以及“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这两个主题群，涉及子主题“自然灾害与防范措施”“人身安全与自我保护”及“珍爱生命的意识”。常见的写作任务是介绍规则及遵守规则的重要性，以及针对如何远离危险，保护自身安全给出合理的建议。体裁多为说明文或书信等应用文。
话题范文剖析
典型例题
目前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生的身心健康。中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯，保证自身安全，远离校园暴力。请根据以下要点提示，以“规范自我行为，做个合格的中学生”为主题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要点：1. 遵守学校纪律，听从老师和家长的教育，严格要求自己；
2. 远离网吧，按时上学和回家；
3. 待人礼貌、友好，不与同学打架；
4. 遇到困难多与父母和老师沟通。
参考词汇：campus violence 校园暴力
素材积累
常用短语
1. 遵守规则obey/follow the rules
2. 当心look out/be careful/take care
3. 照看；照顾look after/take care of
4. 远离stay/keep away from
5. 注意pay attention to
6. 求助ask for help
常用句子
1. It's necessary for us to learn some rules.
对我们来说，学习一些规则是必要的。
2. Stay away from danger.
远离危险。
3. We should learn how to protect ourselves.
我们应该学会如何保护自己。
4. Don't fight with classmates.
不要与同学打架。
思路点拨


佳作赏析
Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, it is important to know ①how to be a good teenager.
②First, we should follow the school rules to behave well at school. It's good for us to listen to the teachers and parents. We must be strict with ourselves. ②Second, to be safe, we should stay away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. ②Third, we③are supposed to be polite and friendly to one another, and shouldn't fight with classmates. ②Last but not least, if we have any difficulties in life, ③it's best to talk about them with our teachers and our parents.
In a word, we should try our best to behave well.
【小编特别提醒】文章首先通过说明校园暴力的危害，引出了 be a good teenager 的主题。然后作者根据写作要点介绍了学生应该如何规范自己的行为以及远离校园暴力的具体做法。作者在表达观点的同时引发了读者的思考，语言准确，表达得体。
①用“疑问词+不定式”结构较好地概括并引出文章的主题。
②利用 first，second，third，last but not least 等词汇使文章条理清晰。
③恰当地使用 be supposed to 以及 it's best to do...句式，符合建议类作文的要求。
单元写作练笔
（天津改编）假如你是李华，请根据图片和问题提示，用英文给你的笔友 Peter 写一封 80 词左右的邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的感人故事。

提示：1. What happened to the old woman?
2. What did Wang Liang do?
3. What do you think of Wang Liang?
参考词汇：蹲下 crouch down
Dear Peter，
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Yours，
Li Hua

答案： As middle school students, it is crucial for us to regulate our own behavior and strive to be qualified students, especially in the face of campus violence which poses a threat to our physical and mental health. Here are some key points I believe we should all follow.Firstly, we must abide by school disciplines and listen to the education provided by our teachers and parents, holding ourselves to high standards. Secondly, we should stay away from internet cafes and make sure to go to school and return home on time. Thirdly, it is essential to treat others with politeness and friendliness, avoiding fights with classmates. Lastly, when encountering difficulties, we should communicate more with our parents and teachers.By adhering to these principles, we can not only protect ourselves from harm but also contribute to creating a harmonious and safe campus environment. Let us all work together to regulate our behavior and become qualified middle school students.
@@1.obey/follow the rules2.look out/be careful/take care3.look after/take care of4.stay/keep away from5.pay attention to6.ask for help