《2025年经纶学典课时作业八年级英语上册译林版》

写作提优专题
【链接中考】
(2024·连云港中考)假如你是李华,你的交换生朋友 Kevin 很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物,他来信询问制作过程,请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)你送的礼物是什么;
(2)你送此礼物的原因;
(3)制作的方法或过程。
注意:(1)词数 90 左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.




Yours,
Li Hua
【思路导引】
1. 审题:本篇写作的主题是给你的交换生朋友 Kevin 写一封回信,介绍你送出的礼物,并说明送出此礼物的原因和制作方法。
2. 体裁:应用文
3. 人称:第一人称
4. 时态:一般过去时
【文章结构】

【高分词句】
1. 决定做某事 decide to do sth
2. 提醒某人某事 remind sb of sth
3. 根据 according to
4. 确保 make sure
5. 以便 ________
6. 期待 ________
7. 我们相信它能给我们带来好运。(省略 that 的宾语从句)
________
8. 确保你为每个部分选择了合适的颜色,这样你的照片看起来会很自然。(目的状语从句)
________
【实战演练】
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.

As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it.

Yours,
Li Hua

答案： 【高分词句】1. decide to do sth；2. remind sb of sth；3. according to；4. make sure；【实战演练】Possible version 1:Dear Kevin,I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it.Yours,Li Hua