《2025年53精准练七年级英语下册人教版山西专版》

课时5 单元写作(2a~2b)
经典例题
旅外大熊猫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的英文手抄报评选活动，你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据下面的提示，完成一篇英语短文。

注意：
1. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What animal looks like a bear and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda!
精准审题
1. 时态：以____________________为主；人称：以____________________为主
2. 核心词汇：救____________________友好的____________________处于危险之中____________________砍伐__________________太多____________________照顾____________________
谋篇布局
第一部分：介绍大熊猫的特点和生活习性——大熊猫可爱又害羞，很友好。它们爱吃竹子，喜欢睡觉。(Pandas are cute, shy and friendly. They like eating bamboo and sleeping.)
第二部分：说明大熊猫易危的原因——人们砍伐许多树木。(People cut down lots of trees.)——大熊猫很容易死于疾病。(Pandas could die of illnesses easily.)
第三部分：阐述政府和我们可以采取的保护大熊猫的措施——政府应该为熊猫建造自然家园。(The government should build natural homes for pandas.)——我们可以去熊猫之家做一些清洁工作。(We can go to the panda homes to do some cleaning work.)
写作升格
某学生写的作文
What animal looks like a bear and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly. They like eating bamboo and sleeping.
Pandas are in danger. They may lose their natural habitats because people cut down too many trees. They could die of illnesses easily. I hope the government can build more natural homes for pandas. Also, we should be nice to pandas and help take care of them.
[点评]本文内容齐全，但前后衔接不够连贯，句子结构较为简单，缺少细节。
让我们来帮帮他！
方法一：增加具体描写，丰富文章内容
①原句：They are also friendly.
→They are also friendly. For example, pandas don’t actively attack (主动攻击) other animals.
②原句：Also, we should be nice to pandas and help take care of them.
→Also, we should be nice to pandas and help take care of them. ______________(具体描述通过做什么事情保护大熊猫，比如：我们可以去熊猫之家打扫卫生。)
方法二：使用衔接词，增加文章连贯性
______________(然而), pandas are in danger.
方法三：丰富词汇多样性
原句：They like eating bamboo and sleeping.
→As for their living habits, pandas like eating bamboo very much and they ______________ ______________(用enjoy doing替换like doing).
范文欣赏
What animal looks like a bear and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! As we all know, pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly. For example, pandas don’t actively attack other animals. As for their living habits, pandas like eating bamboo very much and they enjoy sleeping. However, pandas are in danger. They may lose their natural habitats because people cut down too many trees. What’s more, they could die of illnesses easily.
I hope the government can build more natural homes for pandas to save them. Also, we should be nice to pandas and help take care of them. We can go to the panda homes to do some cleaning work.
实战演练
动物是人类的好朋友。每个人都有自己喜爱的动物。你最喜欢什么动物呢？请以“My Favourite Animal”为题，根据下面要求用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文。
内容提示:
1. What’s your favourite animal?
2. Why do you like it best?
3. What can it do?
4....
My Favourite Animal
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答案： 精准审题 1. 一般现在时；第三人称和第一人称 2. save; friendly; in danger; cut down; too many; look after/ take care of 写作升格 方法一：开放式回答，言之有理即可。如：We can go to the panda homes to do some cleaning work./... 方法二：However 方法三：enjoy sleeping 实战演练 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is the dog. The reasons are as follows. Dogs are kind and friendly. They always stay by your side and try to protect you. They are playful, so many people love to play balls with them in their free time. What’s more, dogs are very smart, and we can teach dogs to do many things. Some dogs can help the blind as guide dogs. Some dogs can even work with the police to find things with their great noses and hearing. All in all, dogs are not only animals, but also good friends to us.