《2025年53精准练七年级英语下册人教版山西专版》

课时5 单元写作(2a~2c)
经典例题
健康是最大的财富。你班将以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为主题召开班会，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈如何过健康的生活。
|Should(√)|Shouldn’t(×)|
|--|--|
|play sports|sit for a long time|
|keep a balanced (均衡的) diet|eat junk food|
|get enough sleep|stay up too late|
|...|...|
要求:
1. 文章须包含表格中的全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
______________________________
Thanks for your time!
精准审题
1. 时态:以__________为主；人称:以__________为主
2. 核心词汇:保持健康__________ 对我们的健康有好处__________ 锻炼__________ 过健康且有意义的生活______________________________
谋篇布局
第一部分：引出话题，简述健康的重要性——我们都知道，健康很重要。因此，今天我想分享一些关于健康生活的建议。(As we all know, health is important. So, today I’d like to share some advice about living a healthy life.)
第二部分：具体描写“我”的建议和观点——should——我们应该运动/保持均衡的饮食/拥有充足的睡眠……因为……(We should play sports/keep a balanced diet/get enough sleep/... Because...)——shouldn’t——我们不应该坐太久/吃垃圾食品/熬夜太晚/……因为……(We shouldn’t sit for a long time/eat junk food/stay up too late/... Because...)
第三部分：强调观点——让我们在日常生活中保持这些习惯，过健康且有意义的生活。(Let’s keep these habits in our daily lives and live a healthy and meaningful life.)
写作升格
某学生写的作文
Dear classmates,
As we all know, health is important. So, today I’d like to share some advice about living a healthy life. Firstly, playing sports can help us keep fit. We shouldn’t sit for a long time. Secondly, keeping a balanced diet is also good for our health. We should eat enough fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat junk food. Thirdly, don’t stay up too late. Getting enough sleep can help to keep healthy.
Let’s keep these habits in our daily lives and live a healthy and meaningful life.
Thanks for your time!
[点评]本文结构清晰，内容切题，但是语言表达较简单，内容缺乏具体的例子或细节，缺乏高级词汇和亮点句型，深度不足。
让我们来帮帮他！
方法一:增加具体活动，丰富文章内容
原句:Firstly, playing sports can help us keep fit. We shouldn’t sit for a long time.
→Firstly, playing sports can help us keep fit. We shouldn’t sit for a long time. For example, we can ______________________________ after school.(举例说明我们平时可以做哪些运动)
方法二:使用高级词汇
① It’s enough for us to ________ ________ (锻炼) twice or three times a week.
②原句:Secondly, keeping a balanced diet is also good for our health.
→Secondly, keeping a balanced diet also plays an important role.
方法三:使用高级句式
原句:We should eat enough fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat junk food.
→There is no doubt that (毋庸置疑的是) it’s good for us to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.
范文欣赏
Dear classmates,
As we all know, health is of great importance. Therefore, today I’d like to share some advice about living a healthy life.
Firstly, playing sports can help us keep fit. We shouldn’t sit for a long time. For example, we can play badminton or basketball after school. It’s enough for us to work out twice or three times a week. Secondly, keeping a balanced diet also plays an important role. There is no doubt that it’s good for us to eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. Thirdly, we’d better get enough sleep and not stay up too late.
Let’s make these habits a part of our daily lives and live a healthier and more meaningful life.
Thanks for your time!
实战演练
假定你是李雷，你们学校的英语杂志社正在举办征文活动，请根据活动信息，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文投稿。短文须包含所有要点，并有所拓展。
Being Healthy
Which do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food? What do you do to stay healthy? Tell us what you think! Write an article to answer these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
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答案： 1. 一般现在时；第一人称 2. keep fit; be good for our health; work out; live a healthy and meaningful life 写作升格 方法一：开放性回答，言之有理即可。如：play badminton or basketball 方法二：work out 实战演练 People may have different ways to keep healthy, such as doing exercise and eating healthy food. I think eating healthy food is more important. At school, we have sports time every day. However, we usually have fast food for lunch in a restaurant. So eating healthy food at home is important for us. Luckily, we can enjoy delicious and healthy food cooked by our parents after school, which makes us feel good. As for me, I often have some vegetable salad for dinner and cook some meat at weekends. I think eating healthy food is helpful for us to stay strong and happy.