《2025年53精准练七年级英语下册人教版山西专版》

课时5 单元写作(2a~2b)
经典例题
假如你是李明，你正在和你的美国朋友在网上聊天，他想知道你的家人正在做什么。请根据下面的图表提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他。

精准审题
1. 时态：以____________为主；人称：以____________为主
2. 核心词汇：此刻__________________ 散步____________________ 读报纸____________________ 洗衣服______________________ 弹吉他____________________ 和……玩耍____________________
谋篇布局
第一部分：开头——现在是11点。我的家人正在做不同的事情。
(It's 11 o'clock. My family are doing different things.)
第二部分：具体叙述“我”的家人正在做的事情——我的爷爷奶奶正在散步。
(My grandpa and grandma are taking a walk.)
——我的爸爸正在看报纸，我的妈妈正在洗衣服。
(My father is reading a newspaper, and my mother is washing clothes.)
——我的哥哥正在他的房间弹吉他，我的妹妹正在和我家的狗玩。
(My brother is playing the guitar in his room, and my sister is playing with our dog.)
第三部分：结尾——你的家人呢？他们现在在做什么？
(What about your family? What are they doing now?)
写作升格
某学生写的作文
It's 11 o'clock here. My family are doing different things.
My grandpa and grandma are taking a walk. My father is reading a newspaper in the living room. My mother is washing clothes in the bathroom. My brother is playing the guitar in his room. My sister is playing with our dog.
What about your family? What are they doing now?
[点评]作者清楚地描述了在11点时每个家庭成员正在进行的活动，但是内容相对简单和直白，缺乏细节描写，语言较为简单，缺乏修辞手法和优美词汇的运用。
让我们来帮帮他！
方法一：增加具体活动，丰富文章内容
原句：My sister is playing with our dog.
→My sister is playing with our dog. ______________________________(拓展和狗的一些互动或对狗进行一些更具体的描述。)
方法二：使用衔接词，增加文章连贯性
原句：My mother is washing clothes in the bathroom.
→As for my mother, she is washing clothes in the bathroom. (as for 关于；至于)
方法三：使用高级词汇
原句：My grandpa and grandma are taking a walk.
→________ my grandpa ________ grandma are taking a walk. (both... and... 两者都……)
方法四：使用高级句式
原句：My father is reading a newspaper in the living room.
→My father is reading a newspaper in the living room. He says it's so interesting that he can't put it down. (so...that... 如此……以至于……)
范文欣赏
It's 11 o'clock here. My family are doing different things. Let me tell you what they are doing.
Both my grandpa and grandma are taking a walk in the park. My father is in the living room. He is reading a newspaper. He says it's so interesting that he can't put it down. As for my mother, she is washing clothes in the bathroom. What is my brother doing? He is practicing playing the guitar in his room. And what is my sister doing at the moment? She is playing with our dog. The dog is very cute and it likes playing with balls.
What about your family? Would you like to tell me what they are doing now?
实战演练
今天是周三，是你们学校的“无作业日”。英语老师打算做一项调查，看看大家晚上都会做些什么。假设现在是晚上7点钟，同学们拍照在班级交流群中分享自己此时正在进行的活动。假如你是Eric，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下大家正在做的事情，并谈谈自己的感受。
| Name | Activities |
| ---- | ---- |
| Michael & his brother | watch TV |
| Grace | wash the dishes |
| Frank & his friend | play ping - pong |
| Helen | play the piano |
| Eric | read a book |
| Julie & her mother | do shopping |
要求：
1. 包含所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Today is No Homework Day of our school. ______________________________

答案： 1.现在进行时；第三人称 2. at the moment; walk/take a walk; read a newspaper; wash clothes; play the guitar; play with 写作升格 方法一：The dog is very cute and it likes playing with balls. (言之有理即可。) 方法三：Both; and 实战演练 Today is No Homework Day of our school. Now, it's 7 o'clock at night. What are my classmates doing? Let me tell you about it. Michael is at home now and he is watching TV with his brother. Grace is in the kitchen. She is washing the dishes and she likes helping with the housework at home. The next is Frank. He is playing ping-pong with his friend. Do you know who is playing the piano? Yes, it's Helen. She can play beautiful music. Where is Julie now? Oh, she is shopping in the supermarket with her mother. What about me? I'm reading an interesting book in my room. And I wish to write a book one day. I think it's a great night for us, because we can do the things we like. It's really fun!