《2025年53精准练七年级英语下册人教版山西专版》

课时5 单元写作(2a~2c)
经典例题
Peter在美国的一家中餐厅工作。为了向大家推荐餐厅的特色菜品，他想录制一段短视频发布在网络上。假如你是Peter，请你根据表格中的信息，用英文给视频配一则宣传广告。
|Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant| | | |
|--|--|--|--|
|Beef and carrot dumplings|Tomato and egg noodles|Gongbao chicken with rice|Soup with vegetables and tofu|
|$10|$8|$9|$6|
要求：
1. 须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于60。
精准审题
1. 时态：以____________________为主；人称：以____________________为主
2. 核心词汇：提供______________ 各种各样的______________ 健康又美味______________ 中国菜______________ 均衡的膳食______________ 搭配______________
谋篇布局
第一部分：表达写作目的——推荐餐厅
——欢迎光临酷先生中餐厅。(Welcome to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant.)
第二部分：具体介绍该餐厅的特色菜
——特色菜的名称、价格、口味等方面(Beef and carrot dumplings...ten dollars... Soup with vegetables and tofu...delicious and healthy...)
第三部分：结尾点题，为餐厅做宣传
——来酷先生中餐厅享受中国美食吧！(Come to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant and enjoy Chinese food!)
写作升格
某学生写的作文
Hi, friends! Welcome to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant. It’s at Center Street. There are many Chinese dishes in our restaurant.
We sell twelve beef and carrot dumplings for only ten dollars. You can have a large bowl of tomato and egg noodles for only eight dollars. You can also have Gongbao chicken with rice. It’s just nine dollars. You can also have some soup. With vegetables and tofu in it, it’s delicious and healthy, and it’s only six dollars.
Come to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant and enjoy Chinese food!
【点评】本文清晰地介绍了餐厅的位置以及特色菜，列出了表格中的菜品及其价格，层次分明，结构完整。但是整体语言较为简单平实，缺乏文采，句式变化较少，表达相对单一，缺少连接词或者过渡句，整体连贯性一般。
让我们来帮帮他！
方法一：增加细节描写，丰富文章内容
原句：We sell twelve beef and carrot dumplings for only ten dollars.
→______ you ______ dumplings? ( 你喜欢……吗? ) We ______ ( 提供 ) twelve beef and carrot dumplings for only ten dollars.
方法二：使用衔接性词汇，提升文章连贯性
Besides (此外), Gongbao chicken with rice can be a good choice for you.
方法三：使用高级词汇，丰富语言多样性
①原句：There are many Chinese dishes in our restaurant.
→There are ______ ______ ______ ( 各种各样的 ) Chinese dishes in our restaurant.
②原句：...it’s delicious and healthy...
→...it’s not only delicious but also healthy... ( 不仅……而且……)
范文欣赏
Hi, friends! Welcome to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant. It’s at Center Street, and there are all kinds of Chinese dishes in our restaurant.
Do you like dumplings? We serve twelve beef and carrot dumplings for only ten dollars. If you like noodles, you can also have a large bowl of tomato and egg noodles for only eight dollars. Besides, Gongbao chicken with rice can be a good choice for you. It’s just nine dollars. What’s more, you can come here to enjoy some soup. With vegetables and tofu in it, it’s not only delicious but also healthy, and it’s only six dollars.
Come to Mr. Cool’s Chinese Restaurant! Here you can enjoy delicious Chinese food at very good prices.
实战演练
假如你是李慧，你叔叔在国外经营一家“格林面馆（Green Noodle House）”，面馆主要经营各类面食。请你根据下列提示，帮助你的叔叔写一则英文版的宣传广告，吸引更多顾客前来就餐。
|面食种类|牛肉面、羊肉面、鸡肉面、蔬菜面|
|--|--|
|本店特色|牛肉面（大碗$22；中碗$18；小碗$12）|
|周末优惠|周末所有面打八折（20% off）|
参考词汇：specialty (n.) 特色菜；medium (adj.) 中等的
要求：
1. 须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于60。

答案： 1. 一般现在时；第二人称和第三人称 2. serve; all kinds of; healthy and delicious; Chinese dishes; balanced diet; go with 写作升格 方法一：Do; like; serve 方法三：all kinds of 实战演练 Would you like to have a bowl of delicious noodles? Why not come to Green Noodle House? In our restaurant, you can order all kinds of noodles. We serve beef noodles, mutton noodles, chicken noodles and vegetable noodles. Among them, the beef noodles are our great specialty. A large bowl of beef noodles is 22 dollars. A medium bowl is 18 dollars. A small bowl is 12 dollars. On weekends, all the noodles are 20% off on sale. Welcome to our restaurant! Here you can enjoy delicious noodles!