《2025年53精准练七年级英语下册人教版山西专版》

课时5 单元写作(2a~2b)
经典例题
假如你是Jack，请你根据下面的内容提示，用英文给你的朋友Peter写一张明信片，词数不少于60，告诉他你假期正在做什么。
内容提示:
.Where are you? What's the weather?
.What are you doing right now?
.What are your friends or family doing? Are you having a good time?
精准审题
1.时态:以_______________为主;人称:以_______________为主
2.核心词汇:晴朗的_______ 多云的_______ 多风的_______ 下雪的_______ 多雨的_______ 热的_______ 温暖的_______ 干燥的_______ 兴高采烈__________
谋篇布局
第一部分：分享假期活动，引入话题——我写这张明信片是为了和你分享我的假期。(I am writing this postcard to share my vacation with you.)
天气——The weather here is...
第二部分：具体介绍自己的假期活动
地点——I'm in... (a place)
做什么——Now, I'm walking around with... (in...)/At this moment, I'm doing..., and my family/friends are doing...
第三部分：总结全文，表达想念——虽然我玩得很开心，但我很想你。你的假期过得怎么样？你玩得开心吗？(Although I'm having fun, I miss you a lot. How about your vacation? Are you having a good time?)
写作升格
某学生写的作文
Dear Peter,
I am writing this postcard to share my vacation with you.
I am in Hangzhou. There are many famous places of interest. The weather here is cool and sunny. I'm sitting by the West Lake with my family now. There are green trees around the lake. The air is fresh and clean. The West Lake is a beautiful place.
I'm having a good time. I miss you a lot. How is your vacation going? Please write a letter and tell me about it.
Yours,
Jack
[点评]本文清晰地描述了自己的所在地、当地天气以及自己和家人正在进行的活动等，同时介绍了西湖的环境特点，但是语言相对单调，缺乏文采。
让我们来帮帮他！
方法一:增加细节描写，丰富文章内容。
原句:The air is fresh and clean.
→The air is fresh and clean and the sun is ________ ________ (明亮地照耀).
方法二:使用衔接词，增加文章连贯性。
原句:I'm having a good time. I miss you a lot.
→________ (虽然) I'm having a wonderful time with my family, I miss you a lot.
方法三:使用高级词汇。
①原句:I'm sitting by the West Lake with my family now.
→My family and I are sitting by the West Lake ________ ________ ________ (此刻).
②原句:Please write a letter and tell me about it.
→________ ________ ________ (希望) hearing from you as soon as possible.
范文欣赏
Dear Peter,
I am writing this postcard to share my vacation with you.
I am in Hangzhou, a place with a lot of famous places of interest. The weather here is cool and sunny. My family and I are sitting by the West Lake at the moment. There are many green trees around the lake. The air is fresh and clean and the sun is shining brightly. Everything makes it a perfect place to relax. The West Lake is such a beautiful place that I'd like to come here again in the future.
Although I'm having a wonderful time with my family, I miss you a lot. I'd like to know something about your vacation. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Jack
实战演练
假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文来描述你们的活动。
内容提示:
1. What are your family doing?
2. What do you think of rainy days?
要求:
1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑;
2. 包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥;
3. 词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Today is Sunday. It's five o'clock in the afternoon now.______________________________

答案： 1. 一般现在时和现在进行时；第一人称和第三人称 2. sunny; cloudy; windy; snowy; rainy; hot; warm; dry; in high spirits 写作升格 方法一：shining brightly 方法二：Although/Though 方法三：① at the moment ② Looking forward to 实战演练 Today is Sunday. It's five o'clock in the afternoon now. It's raining outside, and all of my family are at home. My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living room. My brother Dale is making a model plane in his room. He likes making things very much. My mother is cooking in the kitchen for us. And I'm watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedroom. I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together.