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C Simon wrote about his love for outdoor sports. There are eight mistakes in his text. Underline the mistakes and correct them.
Do you want to get out of your busy daily life and get some fresh experiences? Goes outdoors! Outdoor activities are fun. They were also a good way to keep fit and an easy way to make friends. There are many kinds to chose from, such as rock climbing, hiking and cycling.
I am a fan of outdoor activities. I usually go outdoors at the weekend. Last Sunday, I go fishing with my dad. I have a great time. We don’t catch anything, but it was very nice to enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views of the countryside. My friends and I plans to go hiking next Saturday. We follow a path to the top of a local mountain. I think it’ll be fun.
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Do you want to get out of your busy daily life and get some fresh experiences? Goes outdoors! Outdoor activities are fun. They were also a good way to keep fit and an easy way to make friends. There are many kinds to chose from, such as rock climbing, hiking and cycling.
I am a fan of outdoor activities. I usually go outdoors at the weekend. Last Sunday, I go fishing with my dad. I have a great time. We don’t catch anything, but it was very nice to enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views of the countryside. My friends and I plans to go hiking next Saturday. We follow a path to the top of a local mountain. I think it’ll be fun.
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A Sandy is writing about her favourite outdoor activity. Read her article and learn how to write about your favourite outdoor activity.
Frisbee fun
Use linking words to avoid too many short sentences.
My favourite outdoor activity is frisbee. A frisbee looks like a round plate, and you need to run, throw and catch it when playing. I only started playing it last year, but now, I play as often as I can. It is so much fun.
I like playing frisbee because it is easy to learn and very cheap—I only need a frisbee and some outdoor space.
Use transitional words or phrases to add information when listing the benefits.
Frisbee also helps me keep fit. I have to run fast and jump a lot to catch the frisbee. Moreover, playing frisbee makes me feel relaxed. I have to focus on the flying frisbee, and this helps let go of my worries.
Use different time tenses when introducing different events—the simple present, the simple past, etc.
There are lots of ways to play frisbee, but I love playing in a team and getting goals by throwing the frisbee into the other team’s area. Last weekend, my friends and I played in a match. Many of the other teams had very good players. We didn’t win, but we all had a great time. I even made some new friends.
Use these expressions to show your feelings for the activity.
End with sentences which summarize that it is your favourite outdoor activity.
Frisbee is a great outdoor activity. I can’t wait for more frisbee experiences ahead!
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Beginning: My favourite outdoor activity is frisbee.
Reasons for liking frisbee { Easy and cheap Helps me keep fit Makes me feel relaxed
Playing frisbee { Lots of ways to play Love playing in a team
Ending: A great outdoor activity
◆ Language bank ◆
My favourite outdoor activity is ... ... as often as I can.
It is so much fun. I like ... because ...
... helps me keep fit. ... helps let go of my worries.
We didn’t win, but ... I can’t wait for ...
B Write an article about your favourite outdoor activity.
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Frisbee fun
Use linking words to avoid too many short sentences.
My favourite outdoor activity is frisbee. A frisbee looks like a round plate, and you need to run, throw and catch it when playing. I only started playing it last year, but now, I play as often as I can. It is so much fun.
I like playing frisbee because it is easy to learn and very cheap—I only need a frisbee and some outdoor space.
Use transitional words or phrases to add information when listing the benefits.
Frisbee also helps me keep fit. I have to run fast and jump a lot to catch the frisbee. Moreover, playing frisbee makes me feel relaxed. I have to focus on the flying frisbee, and this helps let go of my worries.
Use different time tenses when introducing different events—the simple present, the simple past, etc.
There are lots of ways to play frisbee, but I love playing in a team and getting goals by throwing the frisbee into the other team’s area. Last weekend, my friends and I played in a match. Many of the other teams had very good players. We didn’t win, but we all had a great time. I even made some new friends.
Use these expressions to show your feelings for the activity.
End with sentences which summarize that it is your favourite outdoor activity.
Frisbee is a great outdoor activity. I can’t wait for more frisbee experiences ahead!
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Beginning: My favourite outdoor activity is frisbee.
Reasons for liking frisbee { Easy and cheap Helps me keep fit Makes me feel relaxed
Playing frisbee { Lots of ways to play Love playing in a team
Ending: A great outdoor activity
◆ Language bank ◆
My favourite outdoor activity is ... ... as often as I can.
It is so much fun. I like ... because ...
... helps me keep fit. ... helps let go of my worries.
We didn’t win, but ... I can’t wait for ...
B Write an article about your favourite outdoor activity.
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