《2025年名师学案九年级英语下册人教版》

单元写作小专题 & Section B(3a～3b)
五步作文法
【话题分析】
本单元以“不可预料的事件”为话题，主要谈论生活中的突发事件以及如何应对突发事件。此类作文要求学生学习使用by the time，before，when等词语或词组描述过去已经发生的事情。常见的写作角度涉及：介绍突发事件的过程。
【写作任务】
假如你是林凯，请你根据下表中的内容提示，合理发挥想象写一篇短文，描述一下发生在你身上的这些意外事件。
|突发事件|结果|
| ---- | ---- |
|父母很早出门上班|睡过了头|
|到公交站时车已经开走|上学迟到|
|忘带作业|回家取的路上被摩托车撞伤|
写作要求：
1. 包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步：写前审题
体裁：
审题 人称：
时态：
第二步：必备短语——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 熬夜：
2. 醒来；叫醒：
3. 到达公交车站：
4. 忘记做某事：
5. 某人去……的路上：
第三步：炼词成句——结合上一步中短语和括号内提示完成句子
6. 昨晚因为一场激动人心的足球比赛，我熬夜了。（because of）
7. 当我醒来时，我的父母已经去上班了。（by the time）
8. 当我到达公交站时，公交车已经开走了。（as引导的时间状语从句）
9. 当我走进教室时，我发现我忘带家庭作业了。（when引导的时间状语从句）
10. 不幸的是，在我回家的路上，我被一辆摩托车撞到了。（用被动语态表达）
□名言添彩：
1. Storms gather without warning in nature, and bad luck befalls men overnight. 天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。
2. Every cloud has a silver lining. 否极泰来。/因祸得福。
第四步：思路点拨

第五步：组句成篇——运用第三步中句子及第四步思路点拨组成段落
Storms gather without warning in nature, and bad luck befalls men overnight. I will never forget what happened today. It was an unlucky day for me.
I will always remember the special day. What an unlucky day I had today!
写作评价：

答案： 第一步：记叙文 第一人称 一般过去时和过去完成时 第二步：1. stay up (late) 2. wake up 3. get to the bus stop 4. forget to do sth. 5. on one’s way to… 第三步：6. I stayed up late last night because of an exciting soccer match. 7. By the time I woke up, my parents had left for work. 8. As I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. 9. When I walked into the classroom, I found I had forgotten to bring my homework. 10. Unluckily, on my way home, I was hit by a motorbike. 第五步： Storms gather without warning in nature, and bad luck befalls men overnight. I will never forget what happened today. It was an unlucky day for me. I stayed up late last night because of an exciting soccer match. So I didn’t hear the alarm go off this morning. By the time I woke up, my parents had left for work. I overslept. I didn’t have breakfast and rushed to the bus stop. But as I got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. As a result, I was late for school. What was worse, when I walked into the classroom, I found I had forgotten to bring my homework. I had to ask the teacher to allow me to fetch it. Unluckily, on my way home, I was hit by a motorbike. I had a great pain in my arms and had to go to the hospital. I will always remember the special day. What an unlucky day I had today!