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假如你是李华，你的朋友 Peter 上周写信告诉你，他对你的运动经历很感兴趣，请你写一封回信跟他分享你的一次运动经历。
注意：词数应为 80 左右。
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Step 1：审题谋篇


|要点|1. 事件的背景信息，如发生的时间、相关人物、环境等
2. 事件发生的经过
3. 自己的感受或得到的启示|
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Step 2：要点补全
①I'm writing to ________（跟你分享我的运动经历）.
②I still remember the day(仍然记得这一天)last summer.
③I went to run a marathon with my father(跟我爸爸去跑马拉松).
④I got wet all through(被淋透了)and felt cold and tired.
⑤So I couldn’t help complaining(忍不住抱怨)and wanted to give up.
⑥Just at that time，my father ________（鼓励我不要放弃）and put his coat on me softly.
⑦We got to the finish line at last(最终到达了终点线)and enjoyed the praise that I had never heard(从没听到过).
Step 3：句式升级
①用定语从句合并 Step 2 中的句②③
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②用分词作状语改写 Step 2 中的句④
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③用分词作状语升级 Step 2 中的句⑦
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Step 4：连句成篇
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答案： Step 1:审题谋篇
记叙文;一般过去时;第一人称
Step 2:要点补全
①share my sports experience with you ②still remember the day ③went to run a marathon with my father ④got wet all through ⑤couldn’t help complaining ⑥encouraged me not to give up ⑦got to the finish line at last; had never heard
Step 3:句式升级
①I still remember the day last summer when I went to run a marathon with my father.
②I got wet all through, feeling cold and tired.
③We got to the finish line at last, enjoying the praise that I had never heard.
Step 4:连句成篇
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going these days? I’m writing to share my sports experience with you.
I still remember the day last summer when I went to run a marathon with my father. We set off early in the morning. Unluckily, it began to rain halfway. I got wet all through, feeling cold and tired. So I couldn’t help complaining and wanted to give up. Just at that time, my father encouraged me not to give up and put his coat on me softly. He told me, “We won’t see the beautiful scenery unless we reach the destination.” His words really cheered me up. We got to the finish line at last, enjoying the praise that I had never heard.
This experience taught me that perseverance is the key to success. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua