《2025年一遍过七年级英语上册冀教版》

过写作 写作能力拓展导练
答案 P17

答案： 过写作 写作能力拓展导练

二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练
1 教材佳句：She is always ready to help people in need.
仿写：她愿意帮助她祖母种花。
She is ready to help her grandma plant flowers.
2 教材佳句：Finally, my mother brings her a big box.
仿写：最后你可以将生日卡片送给你妈妈。
Finally, you can give the birthday card to your mother.
3 教材佳句：We care about one another in my family.
仿写：我们应该多关心父母的健康。
We should care more about our parents’ health.

答案： 1 She is ready to help her grandma plant flowers.
2 Finally, you can give the birthday card to your mother.
3 We should care more about our parents’ health.

三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析
假如你是下图中的女孩 Sally，请根据图片展开合理想象，用英语向朋友 Grace 写一封信，在信中介绍自己的家人。词数 60 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
人称：第三人称为主 时态：一般现在时
语篇类型：应用文

Dear Grace，
________
Please write to me soon and tell me something about your family.
Your friend，
Sally
Step 1 谋篇布局指导



Step 2 高阶表达应用
The boy is my younger brother Bob. He has short black hair.（用 with 合并成一句）
________
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Grace，
Here is ① a photo of my family. The woman is my mother. She is a teacher. And this is my father. He is also a teacher. They work in the same school. The boy with  short  black  hair ② is my younger brother Bob. The girl is me. We are  having ③ a picnic. My parents love us very much and we love them, too.
Please write to me soon and tell me something about your family.
Your friend，
Sally
本篇范文主要介绍了 Sally 的家庭成员，要点齐全，语言简洁。
①此处为倒装句，丰富了文章句式。
②with short black hair 作定语，介绍了 Bob 的外貌特征。
③现在进行时为本单元新学语法，做到了学以致用。

答案： Step 2 高阶表达应用
The boy with short black hair is my younger brother Bob.