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在茫茫人海中,能够遇到好朋友,是一种缘分,也是一种幸运。假如你是Peter,Paul是你的一个好朋友。以下是你们的共同点和不同点。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍Paul,描述你们的异同,以及成为好朋友的原因。

注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右。
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体:记叙文。
2. 人称:第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态:一般现在时。
4. 内容:(1)介绍好朋友的个人信息以及成为好朋友的原因;(2)共同点和不同点。
Step 2 搭——列提纲,搭好框架

Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题
Hello, everyone! My name is Peter. Paul is ______________(……之一)my good friends. He has brown hair and a round face. I like Paul because he is kind and helpful. He is always ready to ______________(在英语学习上帮助我).
2. 主体内容
______________(我们两个都)are tall and outgoing. We are good at playing basketball and often ______________(一起学习). But there are also some differences between us. Paul is ______________(稍高一点)than me. He is also a little more outgoing than me. He likes ______________(讲笑话)and often ______________(使我大笑). But I am more hard - working than Paul. I do better than him in studies, and ______________(获得更好的成绩).
3. 总结收尾
We always help and respect ______________(彼此).
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Hello, everyone! My name is Peter. Paul is one of my good friends. He has brown hair and a round face. I like Paul because he is kind and helpful. He is always ready to help me with my English.
We have something in common. Both of us are tall and outgoing. We are good at playing basketball and often study together. But there are also some differences between us. ①Paul is a little taller than me. He is also a little more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes and often makes me laugh. But I am more hard - working than Paul. I do better than him in studies and get better grades.
② We always help and respect each other. ③I have such a friend. I feel lucky.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 将①处改为含有 not only... but also...的并列句:
________________________
2. 将②处改为包含主语从句和表语从句的复合句:
________________________
3. 将③处合并为含有 it 作形式主语的句子:
________________________
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右。
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体:记叙文。
2. 人称:第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态:一般现在时。
4. 内容:(1)介绍好朋友的个人信息以及成为好朋友的原因;(2)共同点和不同点。
Step 2 搭——列提纲,搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题
Hello, everyone! My name is Peter. Paul is ______________(……之一)my good friends. He has brown hair and a round face. I like Paul because he is kind and helpful. He is always ready to ______________(在英语学习上帮助我).
2. 主体内容
______________(我们两个都)are tall and outgoing. We are good at playing basketball and often ______________(一起学习). But there are also some differences between us. Paul is ______________(稍高一点)than me. He is also a little more outgoing than me. He likes ______________(讲笑话)and often ______________(使我大笑). But I am more hard - working than Paul. I do better than him in studies, and ______________(获得更好的成绩).
3. 总结收尾
We always help and respect ______________(彼此).
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Hello, everyone! My name is Peter. Paul is one of my good friends. He has brown hair and a round face. I like Paul because he is kind and helpful. He is always ready to help me with my English.
We have something in common. Both of us are tall and outgoing. We are good at playing basketball and often study together. But there are also some differences between us. ①Paul is a little taller than me. He is also a little more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes and often makes me laugh. But I am more hard - working than Paul. I do better than him in studies and get better grades.
② We always help and respect each other. ③I have such a friend. I feel lucky.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 将①处改为含有 not only... but also...的并列句:
________________________
2. 将②处改为包含主语从句和表语从句的复合句:
________________________
3. 将③处合并为含有 it 作形式主语的句子:
________________________
答案:
Step 3
1. one of help me with my English 2. Both of us study together a little taller telling jokes makes me laugh get better grades 3. each other
Step 5
1. Paul is not only a little taller but also a little more outgoing than me.
2. What I love most is that we always help and respect each other.
3. It’s lucky for me to have such a friend.
1. one of help me with my English 2. Both of us study together a little taller telling jokes makes me laugh get better grades 3. each other
Step 5
1. Paul is not only a little taller but also a little more outgoing than me.
2. What I love most is that we always help and respect each other.
3. It’s lucky for me to have such a friend.
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