《2025年全效学习同步学练测八年级英语上册人教版》

“读万卷书,行万里路”。假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举行征文比赛,主题是“A Wonderful Trip”。请你根据以下信息写一篇英语短文参加比赛。

注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右。
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体:记叙文。
2. 人称:第一人称。
3. 时态:一般过去时。
4. 内容:一次精彩的旅行。
Step 2 搭——列提纲,搭好框架

一次精彩的旅行
开篇点题 My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. It took us about... to...
主体内容 First, we visited... Then we went to visit... Next, we enjoyed... Besides, we went shopping...
总结收尾 By travelling, we can... This trip was... and I can’t wait to...
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题:
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. It took(花费)us about two hours to fly to Beijing.
2. 主体内容:
There are many places of interest(很多名胜古迹)in Beijing. First, we visited the Great Wall. The natural beauty is amazing. Then we went to visit the Palace Museum. We saw so many beautiful artworks(艺术作品). Next, we enjoyed delicious Beijing roast duck. Besides, we went shopping and bought some special gifts.
3. 总结收尾:
By travelling, we can relax and _______________(学习一些新的东西). This trip was unforgettable, and I ___________(迫不及待地)go there again.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
A Wonderful Trip
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. It took us about two hours to fly to Beijing.
There are many places of interest in Beijing. First, ①we  visited  the  Great  Wall. The  natural  beauty  is  amazing. Then we went to visit the Palace Museum. We saw so many beautiful artworks. Next, ② we  enjoyed  delicious  Beijing  roast  duck. Besides, we went shopping and bought some special gifts.
③By  travelling, we  can  relax  and  learn  something  new. This trip was unforgettable, and I can’t wait to go there again.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 在①处运用定语从句,并补充细节信息:
________________________
2. 在②处补充细节描写:
________________________
3. 在③处运用not only…but also…并列信息,并适当补充细节信息:
________________________

答案： Step 3 1. took 2. many places of interest artworks 3. learn something new can’t wait to
Step 5 1. we paid a visit to the Great Wall, where the natural beauty is really amazing. 2. we enjoyed delicious Beijing roast duck and other local foods at a famous restaurant. 3. By travelling, we can not only relax and make new friends but also learn something new.