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你校英文网站正在举行“家庭欢乐时光(Family Fun Time)”分享活动。假设你是李华，请你根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
(1)When is your family fun time?
(2)What do you often do together?
(3)How do you feel about having family fun time with your family?
注意：
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Hua. I'm from Class 1，Grade 8.______________________________
Step 1 审——审清题意
1. 文体：记叙文，为话题作文。
2. 人称：第一人称。
3. 时态：一般现在时。
4. 内容：描述家庭欢乐时光的具体时间、活动及感受。
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架

Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
I'm happy toshare my family fun time with(和……分享我的家庭欢乐时光) you. My family fun time is on Friday night.
2. 主体内容：
We often cook together and share delicious meals. ____________________(吃晚饭时)，we talk to one another and have a good laugh. My favourite family activity is watching movies together. ____________________(分享关于电影的不同看法) is exciting. I can learn what my parents and my grandparents think.
3. 总结收尾：
My familyis full of(充满) so much love!
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Family Fun Time
My name is Li Hua. I'm from Class 1，Grade 8. I'm happy to share my family fun time with you. ① My family fun time is on Friday night. ②
We often cook together and share delicious meals. During dinner，we talk to one another and have a good laugh. ③My  favourite  family  activity  is  watching  movies  together. Sharing different ideas about movies is exciting. I can learn what my parents and my grandparents think.
④ My family is full of so much love!
Step 5 修——修饰美化
1. 在①处加入过渡句，使得上下文衔接自然流畅：
____________________
2. 在②处补充 it's a... time for sb. to do sth. because...句型对文章进行总述，使得结构清晰：
____________________
3. 将③处改写为 v. -ing 作主语，并结合短语 one of：
____________________
4. 在④处用 be important to 及 make a difference 进行铺垫并再次点题，使得行文更为流畅：
____________________

答案： Step 3 1. share my family fun time with 2. During dinner Sharing different ideas about movies 3. is full of
Step 5 1. Now, let me talk about my family fun time! 2. It is a wonderful time for us to enjoy family activities because they can make us love each other deeply. 3. Watching movies together is also one of my favourite family activities. 4. Family fun time is important to me because some of my wonderful memories can make a difference to my life.