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不知不觉中你的初中生活已经度过了一个学期,在这个学期中,你一定认识了一些新朋友。请你以“My best friend”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文,介绍你最好的一位朋友。
My best friend
I have a lot of friends in my school. Lily is my best friend. She is 13 years old and in Class 5,Grade 7. She is tall and slim and her bright smiling eyes make her look really kind. ①
Her favourite subject is PE and running is her favourite sport,because it can help her keep healthy. ② Lily is also interested in reading and she thinks reading can help her know more. ③
Lily likes to make friends with others. She can listen to others carefully and help them with their problems. ④
[名师点评] 本文是一篇记叙文,时态为一般现在时,主要使用第三人称记叙。全文行文流畅,表述完整。文章结构清晰,全文分为三个段落。
第一段介绍了自己最好的朋友是谁,包括其姓名、年龄、所在班级和年级以及外貌等信息。其中①为高分句型,本句为and连接的并列句,后一分句中eyes前有丰富的修饰语,同时还使用了高分短语“make sb. do ...”。
第二段介绍了朋友最喜爱的科目以及兴趣爱好。其中②和③为高分句型。句型②中包含because引导的状语从句,句型③使用了高分短语be interested in和help sb. do sth.。
第三段介绍了朋友喜爱的一些活动。其中④为高分句型,句中help sb. with sth.是重要短语。
My best friend
I have a lot of friends in my school. Lily is my best friend. She is 13 years old and in Class 5,Grade 7. She is tall and slim and her bright smiling eyes make her look really kind. ①
Her favourite subject is PE and running is her favourite sport,because it can help her keep healthy. ② Lily is also interested in reading and she thinks reading can help her know more. ③
Lily likes to make friends with others. She can listen to others carefully and help them with their problems. ④
[名师点评] 本文是一篇记叙文,时态为一般现在时,主要使用第三人称记叙。全文行文流畅,表述完整。文章结构清晰,全文分为三个段落。
第一段介绍了自己最好的朋友是谁,包括其姓名、年龄、所在班级和年级以及外貌等信息。其中①为高分句型,本句为and连接的并列句,后一分句中eyes前有丰富的修饰语,同时还使用了高分短语“make sb. do ...”。
第二段介绍了朋友最喜爱的科目以及兴趣爱好。其中②和③为高分句型。句型②中包含because引导的状语从句,句型③使用了高分短语be interested in和help sb. do sth.。
第三段介绍了朋友喜爱的一些活动。其中④为高分句型,句中help sb. with sth.是重要短语。
答案:
My best friend
I have a lot of friends in my school. Tom is my best friend. He is 13 years old and in Class 3, Grade 7. He is of medium height with short black hair and always wears a smile.
His favorite subject is Math because he thinks it's challenging and interesting. Playing basketball is his favorite sport, and he often plays with classmates after school.
Tom is friendly and helpful. He always listens to others carefully and is ready to help people solve problems. We get on well with each other and often study together.
I have a lot of friends in my school. Tom is my best friend. He is 13 years old and in Class 3, Grade 7. He is of medium height with short black hair and always wears a smile.
His favorite subject is Math because he thinks it's challenging and interesting. Playing basketball is his favorite sport, and he often plays with classmates after school.
Tom is friendly and helpful. He always listens to others carefully and is ready to help people solve problems. We get on well with each other and often study together.
假设你是西蒙,刚来南京市第一中学学习,请根据下表所提示的要点,写一篇英语短文,向你的新同学介绍自己的个人情况。
|姓名|西蒙(Simon)|
|年龄|12 岁|
|国籍|美国|
|家庭情况|四口人,与父母和妹妹生活|
|学校班级|南京市第一中学,七(2)班|
|外貌长相|棕色短发,高且瘦,戴眼镜……|
|爱好特长|爱听音乐,擅长唱歌|
|未来计划|想当歌手……|
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称。
[写作提纲]
|Para. 1|个人信息|My name is ...I'm ... years old.I come from ...|
|Para. 2|家庭和班级情况|four peopleI live with ...a new student at ...in Class 2,Grade 7|
|Para. 3|外貌和爱好特长|short brown hairtall and thinwear glasseslike listening to musicbe good at singing|
|Para. 4|未来计划|I want to be ...I hope ...|
(续表)
[妙笔生花]
Hi,my name is Simon. I'm 12 years old.______
I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.
|姓名|西蒙(Simon)|
|年龄|12 岁|
|国籍|美国|
|家庭情况|四口人,与父母和妹妹生活|
|学校班级|南京市第一中学,七(2)班|
|外貌长相|棕色短发,高且瘦,戴眼镜……|
|爱好特长|爱听音乐,擅长唱歌|
|未来计划|想当歌手……|
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称。
[写作提纲]
|Para. 1|个人信息|My name is ...I'm ... years old.I come from ...|
|Para. 2|家庭和班级情况|four peopleI live with ...a new student at ...in Class 2,Grade 7|
|Para. 3|外貌和爱好特长|short brown hairtall and thinwear glasseslike listening to musicbe good at singing|
|Para. 4|未来计划|I want to be ...I hope ...|
(续表)
[妙笔生花]
Hi,my name is Simon. I'm 12 years old.______
I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.
答案:
写作专项提优
One possible version:
Hi,my name is Simon. I'm 12 years old. I come from America.
There are four people in my family. I live with my parents and younger sister in Nanjing. Now I'm a new student at Nanjing No. 1 Middle School. I'm in Class 2,Grade 7.
I have short brown hair. I'm tall and thin. I have two big eyes,but I always wear glasses. I like listening to music. And I'm good at singing.
I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.
One possible version:
Hi,my name is Simon. I'm 12 years old. I come from America.
There are four people in my family. I live with my parents and younger sister in Nanjing. Now I'm a new student at Nanjing No. 1 Middle School. I'm in Class 2,Grade 7.
I have short brown hair. I'm tall and thin. I have two big eyes,but I always wear glasses. I like listening to music. And I'm good at singing.
I want to be a good singer in the future. I hope everyone will like my songs.
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