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二、话题写作。
【典型例题】
为了更好地指导和帮助学生合理地休闲娱乐,学校决定进行关于娱乐活动的问卷调查。请以“My fun activity”为题,写一写你的休闲娱乐情况。内容包括:休闲娱乐活动类型、对你的影响等,如有不利影响,请提出改进措施。
要求:1. 短文必须包含所给要点,并适当拓展;
2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范、书面整洁;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 词数80左右。
【写作指导】
Step 1 审好题 定方向
本文写作时以第一人称的口吻进行叙述,时态以一般现在时为主,如插叙往事则需用过去相关时态。写作时按照要点适当拓展,可运用祈使句。
Step 2 列要点 拓思维
1. 要点梳理
①休闲娱乐活动的类型;
②对自己的影响;
③如有不利影响,可采取的改进措施。
2. 亮点荟萃
结合本单元所学内容,可以借鉴使用以下词汇或表达。
①娱乐活动:reading books,listening to music,playing sports,playing computer games,watching movies,watching short videos...
I like... best. / My favourite fun activity is...
②对自己的影响:
It makes me happy/relaxed/...
... keeps/brings me...
I get lost in...
It eats away my time,minute by minute.
But I sit there without noticing it at all.
I miss out on some sweet moments with loved ones.
I am deaf to the real world.
③如有不利影响,提出改进措施:
Playing too much also makes Jack a dull boy.
I should keep it away by having fun in a balanced way.
Stand up and leave the screen.
Go outside,feel the sun on your face,and jog in the fresh air.
Play tennis or go hiking with your friends.
Talk about your day with your family.
Step 3 成篇章 赏美文
My fun activity
As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Fun activities are important for us. As for me,my favourite fun activity is playing computer games. Because it can make me relaxed and happy after the long day at school.
However,the computer games are so interesting that it's easy for me to get lost in it. It eats away my time,minute by minute. And I sit there without noticing it at all. It will be bad for my health and my study.
To keep the time - eating monster away,I have to have fun in a balanced way. For example,I will spend less time playing computer games. I will stand up and leave the screen. I will go outside,feel the sun on my face,and jog in the fresh air.
I will try my best to make a balance between play and study. What about you?
【典型例题】
为了更好地指导和帮助学生合理地休闲娱乐,学校决定进行关于娱乐活动的问卷调查。请以“My fun activity”为题,写一写你的休闲娱乐情况。内容包括:休闲娱乐活动类型、对你的影响等,如有不利影响,请提出改进措施。
要求:1. 短文必须包含所给要点,并适当拓展;
2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范、书面整洁;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 词数80左右。
【写作指导】
Step 1 审好题 定方向
本文写作时以第一人称的口吻进行叙述,时态以一般现在时为主,如插叙往事则需用过去相关时态。写作时按照要点适当拓展,可运用祈使句。
Step 2 列要点 拓思维
1. 要点梳理
①休闲娱乐活动的类型;
②对自己的影响;
③如有不利影响,可采取的改进措施。
2. 亮点荟萃
结合本单元所学内容,可以借鉴使用以下词汇或表达。
①娱乐活动:reading books,listening to music,playing sports,playing computer games,watching movies,watching short videos...
I like... best. / My favourite fun activity is...
②对自己的影响:
It makes me happy/relaxed/...
... keeps/brings me...
I get lost in...
It eats away my time,minute by minute.
But I sit there without noticing it at all.
I miss out on some sweet moments with loved ones.
I am deaf to the real world.
③如有不利影响,提出改进措施:
Playing too much also makes Jack a dull boy.
I should keep it away by having fun in a balanced way.
Stand up and leave the screen.
Go outside,feel the sun on your face,and jog in the fresh air.
Play tennis or go hiking with your friends.
Talk about your day with your family.
Step 3 成篇章 赏美文
My fun activity
As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Fun activities are important for us. As for me,my favourite fun activity is playing computer games. Because it can make me relaxed and happy after the long day at school.
However,the computer games are so interesting that it's easy for me to get lost in it. It eats away my time,minute by minute. And I sit there without noticing it at all. It will be bad for my health and my study.
To keep the time - eating monster away,I have to have fun in a balanced way. For example,I will spend less time playing computer games. I will stand up and leave the screen. I will go outside,feel the sun on my face,and jog in the fresh air.
I will try my best to make a balance between play and study. What about you?
答案:
【写作应用】
请以“How do students relax?”为题写一篇文章。内容包括:
1. 列举几种当前中学生参与的娱乐活动;
2. 指出对学生身心健康不利的娱乐活动;
3. 介绍你最喜欢的娱乐活动,并说明理由。
要求:1. 包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3. 词数80左右。
How do students relax?
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请以“How do students relax?”为题写一篇文章。内容包括:
1. 列举几种当前中学生参与的娱乐活动;
2. 指出对学生身心健康不利的娱乐活动;
3. 介绍你最喜欢的娱乐活动,并说明理由。
要求:1. 包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3. 词数80左右。
How do students relax?
______________________________
答案:
Nowadays, many students enjoy playing computer games in their spare time because they think the exciting games make them relaxed. While some students prefer to play sports, such as swimming, playing basketball, cycling and so on.
I think playing computer games is not a good way to relax, because it’s bad for health. Playing basketball is my favourite. Playing basketball can help us relax after a day’s hard work. What’s more, it can help us keep healthy. And we can make many friends while playing basketball.
In a word, playing sports can make us relaxed and healthy. Why not try it?
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