《2025年精彩练习就练这一本九年级英语全一册外研版评议教辅》

【Part B】范例剖析
社会的发展变化使人们的生活越来越好,请根据下表提示,从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式四个方面,以“How Life Changes”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,谈谈当今社会生活中的一些重要变化。

思路点拨
第一步: 细审题,列要点。根据题意,短文应包括所给的提示要点并需要适当拓展。
第二步: 拟提纲,分段落。
第一段: 总起揭示话题。可运用如“Great changes have taken place in our life for years. /Let's have a look at these examples.”等句式。
第二段: 具体描述过去和现在在信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式等方面的变化。可运用如“In the past, people .../But now people can ...”等句式。
第三段: 总结并谈谈感受。可运用如“In a word, thanks to ..., people live better than before. /Let's ...”等句式。
第三步: 重连贯,多润色。在初稿基础上添加一些必要的过渡衔接词,如 what's more、on the contrary、in a word 等,尝试使用高级词汇,变化所用句式,提升短文的亮点和文采。
How Life Changes
Great changes have taken place in our life for years. Let's have a look at these examples.
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV 1.for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly 2.by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or market. Big families had to share small houses that were old and dirty. Children used 3.to go to school by bike.
But now people can get information on the mobile phone or computer almost 4.in any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What's more, people can 5.contact others by email, WeChat or QQ, with which they can send and 6.receive messages whenever they are. More and more people live in 7.new and clean apartments with several rooms. More families are rich enough to send their children to school 8.in their own cars.
In a word, thanks to the social progress, people live better than before. Let's cherish what we have today.

答案： 【解析】：
题目要求写一篇英语短文，主题是“How Life Changes”，需要从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式四个方面描述过去和现在的变化。根据题目给出的思路点拨，我们可以按照以下步骤进行写作：
1. 总起揭示话题，引出下文。
2. 具体描述过去和现在在四个方面的变化，注意使用对比句式。
3. 总结全文，谈谈感受。
【答案】：
How Life Changes
Great changes have taken place in our life for years. Let's have a look at these examples.
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio, and watched TV for news and other information. They went shopping in shops or markets. People lived in old and dirty houses. They kept in touch with others mainly by writing letters or sending postcards.
But now, people can get information on their mobile phones or computers almost anywhere and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What's more, people can contact others by email, WeChat, or QQ, which allows them to send and receive messages instantly. More and more people live in new and clean houses or apartments with several rooms. Many families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars.
In a word, thanks to the social progress, people live better than before. Let's cherish what we have today.