《2025年精彩练习就练这一本九年级英语全一册外研版评议教辅》

【Part B】范例剖析
假如某中学生英文报正在开展关于生活变化的征文活动,请你根据下表的要点提示,以“Changes in the School Life”为题写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文,介绍过去和现在学校生活的变化,并简单展望未来的学校生活。

第一步：细审题,列要点。根据题意,短文应包括所给的提示要点并需要适当拓展。
第二步：拟提纲,分段落。
第一段：总起揭示话题。可运用如“Great changes have taken place in ...”等句式。
第二段：重点介绍交通方式、学习方式和课外活动方面的变化。可运用如“used to do sth./with the development of/It's＋adj.＋for sb. to do sth./sb. spend ... doing sth.”等表述。
第三段：展望未来的学校生活。可运用如“have more free time/The school life will be ...”等表述。
第三步：重连贯,多润色。在初稿基础上添加一些必要的过渡衔接词,如 first of all、besides、what's more、last but not least 等,尝试使用高级词汇,变化所用句式,提升短文的亮点和文采。
•补全佳作(每空词数不限)
Changes in the School Life
Great changes have taken place in the school life in the past few years.
In the past,students used to walk or 1. ride a bike to school. 2. With the development of public transport,it's really convenient for us to go to school by bus or by subway. Also,in the past,students could learn only from books. Nowadays computers are widely 3. used in class,and students can learn 4. in many lively and interesting ways. What's more,students 5. spent much time playing outside school in the past,but nowadays students have much more colourful after-school 6. activities at school.
In the future,students will have more free time to do 7. what they like. I'm sure the school life will 8. be more interesting and more relaxing.

答案： 1. ride 2. With 3. used 4. in 5. spent 6. activities 7. what 8. be