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【Part B】范例剖析
假如你是李明,将参加某英文网站以“My Favourite Festival”为题开展的征文活动。请根据下面的提示,从中西方节日中任选其一,用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文投稿。
提示：
1. 写出一个你最喜欢的节日,并说明理由。
2. 描述你过该节日的经历。
3. 谈谈你对该节日的感受或建议。
•思路点拨
第一步：细审题,列要点。根据题意,短文应包括介绍最喜爱的节日、亲身经历及对该节日的感受等。
第二步：拟提纲,分段落。
第一段：总起段落,介绍自己最喜爱的节日。可运用如“As for me,I like Mother's Day best because ...”等句式。
第二段：重点介绍自己过该节日的经历。可运用如“Last Mother's Day,I invited .../When I .../To my surprise ...”等表述。
第三段：谈谈对该节日的感受。可运用如“I love ... not just for ... but ...”等句式。
第三步：重连贯,多润色。在初稿基础上添加一些必要的过渡衔接词,尝试使用高级词汇,变化所用句式,提升短文的亮点和文采。
 •补全佳作(每空词数不限)
My Favourite Festival
Everyone has his or her own favourite festival. As for me,I like 1. ______ best because it's the best time to 2. ______ my love to my mother.
Last Mother's Day,I invited my mother to go to 3. ______. I had an appointment with her but I forgot it. 4. ______ I got there,the movie had almost finished. However,my mother was still waiting at the theatre. How 5. ______ I felt! To my surprise,my mother didn't blame me. Instead,she wasn't 6. ______ but said patiently as usual,“You should do everything on time. Keeping a promise is very 7. ______ for everyone.” I felt really guilty.
I'll never forget that day. Mother's love is as 8. ______ as the ocean. I love my mum not just for what she has done for our family,but for the lesson she gave to me.

答案： 1. Mother's Day 2. show 3. the movies 4. When 5. sorry 6. angry 7. important 8. deep