《2025年精彩练习就练这一本九年级英语全一册外研版评议教辅》

【Part B】范例剖析
每个人都有独自在家的经历。第一次你父母不在家时的情景你是否依然记得？请你以“My First Experience of Being Home Alone”为题,写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文,讲述自己第一次独自在家的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
• 思路点拨
第一步：细审题,列要点。根据题意,短文应介绍独自在家的亲身经历及感受等。
第二步：拟提纲,分段落。
第一段：总起段落,引出话题。可运用如“As teenagers, we all have an experience of being home alone. /Here I'd like to share ...”等句式。
第二段：重点介绍独自在家的经历。如可依据时间线索“One day .../But soon .../In the end ...”等描述事情的经过。
第三段：谈谈对独自在家的感受。可运用如“Being home alone was not as difficult as I thought. /My first experience of being home alone has made a big difference to me.”等句式。
第三步：重连贯,多润色。在初稿基础上添加一些必要的过渡衔接词,尝试使用高级词汇,变化所用句式,提升短文的亮点和文采。
• 补全佳作(每空词数不限)
My First Experience of Being Home Alone
As teenagers, we all have an experience of being home alone. But life isn't always as 1. easy as we think. Here I'd like to 2. share my first experience of being home alone.
When I was 12, my parents went to another town to look after my sick grandfather. I had to be home all by 3. myself for 24 hours. At first, I was a little 4. afraid/worried. But soon I forgot about it because I threw myself into an interesting book. I 5. spent the whole morning reading it. At noon, I took the food out of the fridge and heated it. Mum had cooked a lot of food 6. before she left. In order to prove that I could 7. take care of/look after myself, I washed my clothes in the afternoon. In the evening, I finished my homework. At night, after watching a movie on TV, I went to bed at 10:30.
Being home alone was not as difficult as I thought. I felt 8. proud of myself. My first experience of being home alone has made a big difference to me. I have become more and more confident and independent(独立的).

答案： （有些答案不唯一，合理即可）1. easy 2. share 3. myself 4. afraid/worried 5. spent 6. before 7. take care of/look after 8. proud