《2025年精彩练习就练这一本九年级英语全一册外研版评议教辅》

【Part B】范例剖析
作为中学生,我们不仅要有独立意识,还要有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中,我们能互相学习,互相帮助,共同讨论,能分享学习中的快乐与烦恼,能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长！请你以“How to Learn Together as a Team”为主题写一篇英文演讲稿。(80词左右)
•思路点拨
第一步：细审题,列要点。根据题目要求,列出要点,并需要适当拓展。
第二步：拟提纲,分段落。
第一段：总起揭示话题。可运用如“Today my topic is .../It's very important for us to ...”等句式。
第二段：重点阐述如何做到团队合作。可运用如“First,we must .../We are supposed to .../In a team,it is very important to ...”等句式。
第三段：总结并强调团队合作的意义。可运用如“Let's help each other,discuss problems happily and share little by little./Then we grow up.”等句式。
第三步：重连贯,多润色。在初稿基础上添加一些必要的过渡衔接词,如 first、second、then、what's more、last but not least、in a word 等,尝试使用高级词汇,变化所用句式,提升短文的亮点和文采。
•补全佳作(每空词数不限)
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today my topic is “How to Learn Together as a Team”. It's very important for us to learn to look after ourselves. And it is also important for us to learn together as a team.
First,we must be 1. friendly/kind to others. We should help others when they are 2. in trouble. There is no doubt that helping others is helping ourselves. In a team,anyone is helped and anyone 3. helps others. Then,we are supposed to discuss. 4. When we discuss,we either talk or listen. We have to talk clearly and we must listen carefully,5. so we can find what the mistakes are and how we should correct them. After discussing,we are sure to get more. What's more,in a team,it is very important to 6. share. We are used to thinking about ourselves. Now it is time to learn to share with others；share love and care；share happiness and sadness and so on. Let's 7. grow up in sharing!
In a word,we are like a family in a team. Let's help each other,discuss problems happily and share little by little. Then we grow up. That's all for my speech. Thank you!

答案： 1. friendly/kind 2. in trouble 3. helps 4. When 5. so 6. share 7. grow up