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经典例题
友谊,需要用忠诚去播种,用热情去灌溉。请以“My best friend”为题目介绍一下你对“朋友”的看法,并描述你和朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处,以及你对“朋友应该相同还是不同”的看法。
提示:What do you think a good friend is like?
Who is your best friend? In what ways are you similar and different?
Do you think friends should be the same or different? Why?
要求:
(1) 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2) 不少于 90 词。
【高分范文】
My best friend
① A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think friends are like mirrors.
② My good friends like to do the same things as me. My best friend is Tina. We have similar character. She is as out-going as me. So we often take part in some activities. Both of us are good at volleyball. But I can play volleyball a little better than her. We like different subjects. I am good at English, and she does well in Maths. ③ Once Tina failed the English exam, and she felt upset. I decided to help her with it and she helped me with my Maths. After that, both of us decided to study harder to make progress day by day.
④ As friends, I think we should help and truly care about each other.
亮点赏析
▶ 文章结构清晰,表达流畅。既有谚语点睛又有生活实例,通过对比句式与复合句展现语言潜力,完美诠释了“友谊需要互助与真心”的主题。
▶ ① 引用谚语 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 开篇,直接点明友谊主题,语言简洁有力,奠定情感基调。
▶ ② 通过 the same...as, similar, as...as, Both of...和 a little better than, different 等词或短语对比朋友 Tina 与自己的异同,展现友谊的互补性。
▶ ③ 用考试失利互助、共同制定学习计划等具体事例,让抽象的友谊概念具象化。
▶ ④ As friends, we should...形成首尾呼应,主题升华自然。
友谊,需要用忠诚去播种,用热情去灌溉。请以“My best friend”为题目介绍一下你对“朋友”的看法,并描述你和朋友之间的相同之处和不同之处,以及你对“朋友应该相同还是不同”的看法。
提示:What do you think a good friend is like?
Who is your best friend? In what ways are you similar and different?
Do you think friends should be the same or different? Why?
要求:
(1) 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2) 不少于 90 词。
【高分范文】
My best friend
① A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think friends are like mirrors.
② My good friends like to do the same things as me. My best friend is Tina. We have similar character. She is as out-going as me. So we often take part in some activities. Both of us are good at volleyball. But I can play volleyball a little better than her. We like different subjects. I am good at English, and she does well in Maths. ③ Once Tina failed the English exam, and she felt upset. I decided to help her with it and she helped me with my Maths. After that, both of us decided to study harder to make progress day by day.
④ As friends, I think we should help and truly care about each other.
亮点赏析
▶ 文章结构清晰,表达流畅。既有谚语点睛又有生活实例,通过对比句式与复合句展现语言潜力,完美诠释了“友谊需要互助与真心”的主题。
▶ ① 引用谚语 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 开篇,直接点明友谊主题,语言简洁有力,奠定情感基调。
▶ ② 通过 the same...as, similar, as...as, Both of...和 a little better than, different 等词或短语对比朋友 Tina 与自己的异同,展现友谊的互补性。
▶ ③ 用考试失利互助、共同制定学习计划等具体事例,让抽象的友谊概念具象化。
▶ ④ As friends, we should...形成首尾呼应,主题升华自然。
答案:
My best friend
A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think a good friend should be honest, kind and supportive, always there to share happiness and sadness.
My best friend is Lily. We are similar in some ways. Both of us are hard-working and enjoy reading books. We often go to the library together on weekends. However, we also have differences. Lily is more outgoing than me and loves playing sports, while I prefer staying quiet and drawing pictures. She is good at P.E., but I do better in Art.
I think friends don't have to be the same. Different personalities can bring new experiences and help each other grow. Lily encourages me to be more active, and I teach her how to draw. Our differences make our friendship more colorful and meaningful.
A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think a good friend should be honest, kind and supportive, always there to share happiness and sadness.
My best friend is Lily. We are similar in some ways. Both of us are hard-working and enjoy reading books. We often go to the library together on weekends. However, we also have differences. Lily is more outgoing than me and loves playing sports, while I prefer staying quiet and drawing pictures. She is good at P.E., but I do better in Art.
I think friends don't have to be the same. Different personalities can bring new experiences and help each other grow. Lily encourages me to be more active, and I teach her how to draw. Our differences make our friendship more colorful and meaningful.
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