《2025年名校课堂六年级英语上册鲁教版山东专版54制》

03 范文剖析
假设你是李明，今年9月份刚上初一。你的英国网友John对你的新学校充满好奇。请你根据你们学校的平面图写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你的新学校和你对新学校的感受。词数不少于60。

参考词汇:flower bed 花圃;main 主要的;side 一旁
▶▶审题指导
1. 文体:应用文
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 写作要点:写作时，叙述要有条理，方位描述清楚，注意方位词和there be句型的使用。
▶▶思路点拨

答案：

▶▶优秀范文

Dear John，

Thanks for your email. I’m glad to tell you something about my new school. This is a map of my new school.

①When you come into the school, you can see a tall teaching building ②in the middle of the school. ③There are two flower beds on each side of the main road. A library is ④on the left. I spend lots of time reading there. ⑤On the right, there is an office building. A big playground is ⑥behind the teaching building. We do exercises there every morning. You can find a computer room ⑦next to the playground.

Our school is a place ⑧with many trees and flowers. It isn’t modern but very beautiful. What’s your school like?

Yours，

Li Ming

点评：

②in the middle of,④on the left,⑤On the right,⑥behind 和⑦next to 等方位词的使用让描述更生动细致。

①When 引导的时间状语从句，③there be句型和⑧with复合结构的使用使文章的句式表达更高级。

本篇范文语言精练，描述细致，同时能够运用本单元所学方位词，短语 spend lots of time doing 和句型 There are, What’s…like等。