《2025年名校课堂六年级英语上册鲁教版山东专版54制》

本学期紧张而愉快的学习生活已经开始了，你一定结识了很多新朋友吧！假如你是李华，请根据下面的导图内容，以“My Good Friend”为题，用英语写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，向大家介绍一下你的好朋友。

审题指导
1. 文体：说明文
2. 人称：以第三人称为主
3. 时态：一般现在时
4. 写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。
思路点拨

答案：

优秀范文

My Good Friend

I'm Li Hua. My good friend is Annie.

She comes from the US. She is 14 years old. She has ①short black hair and ②big eyes. She looks ③beautiful. Her favourite sport is tennis. She always plays it with me after school. Black is her favourite colour，so all her clothes are black. She thinks black looks ④cool. For food，she ⑤likes Beijing roast duck a lot. ⑥There are 4 people in her family. Her father is a driver ⑦and her mother is a nurse. Annie and her brother Tom are both students. They love each other.

I'm happy to be her friend. ⑧Would you like to be her friend too?

点评：

①short black hair，②big eyes，③beautiful，④cool和⑤likes... a lot等单词或短语的使用使人物的描写更细致形象。

⑥there be句型，⑦连接词and和⑧Would you like to...句型的使用使文章的句式更丰富，表达更高级。

本篇范文语言精练，生动形象，同时能够运用本单元所学短语 come from，favourite sport，each other和句型 She always plays it with me after school，Would you like to be her friend等。