《2025年名校课堂六年级英语上册鲁教版山东专版54制》

03 范文剖析
每年的5月15日为国际家庭日（International Day of Families）。假如你是Sandy，你校英语俱乐部将举办家庭教育周，现面向全体同学发起征文。请你以“I Love My Family”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍一下你的家庭和家庭成员。
内容包括：
1.你的基本信息(姓名、年龄……)；
2.家庭成员的基本信息（长相、职业、爱好……）；
3.……
▶▶审题指导
1.文体：说明文
2.人称：以第三人称为主
3.时态：一般现在时
4.写作要点：明确写作要点，所给的要点要全，并加入自主发挥的部分。
▶▶思路点拨

答案：

▶▶优秀范文

I Love My Family

My  name  is  Sandy. I am a student in Grade Seven. I have a big family.

My father is very ①handsome. He is an English teacher and he works in a middle school. He ②likes reading every day. My mother is ③beautiful and kind. She is a doctor. She ④can play ping-pong very well! I have a ⑤seven-year-old sister. She ⑥has big eyes and she is ⑦not tall or short. She loves reading too. We have a lot of fun together. My grandparents live with us. They ⑧spend a lot of time playing Chinese chess.

I love my family. What is fun about your family?

点评：

①handsome，③beautiful and kind，⑤seven-year-old，⑥has big eyes和⑦not tall or short的使用使人物的描写更细致形象。

②likes reading，④can play ping-pong very well和⑧spend a lot of time playing Chinese chess的使用使文章的句式更丰富。

本篇范文语言精练，表达多样，同时能够运用本单元所学短语have a lot of fun together，spend a lot of time playing Chinese chess和句型What is fun about your family等。