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[开头句]
1. 我最喜欢的动物是狗。
My
favourite
animals
are dogs.2. 我和杰克经常在星期天早上去动物园。
Jack and I often
go
to
the
zoo
on Sunday morning.[中间句]
1. 在动物园里有许多种类的动物。
There are
many
kinds
of
animals at the zoo.2. 我们也看一场动物表演。
We also watch
an
animal
show
.[结尾句]
1. 我们应该保护我们周围的动物。
We should protect the
animals
around
us
.2. 它使我的生活非常幸福和轻松。
It makes my life very
happy
and
relaxing
.
答案：
[开头句]
1. My favourite animals 2. go to the zoo
[中间句]
1. many kinds of 2. an animal show
[结尾句]
1. animals around us 2. happy and relaxing
1. My favourite animals 2. go to the zoo
[中间句]
1. many kinds of 2. an animal show
[结尾句]
1. animals around us 2. happy and relaxing
假如你是王磊,你的外国朋友杰克(Jack)对中国的大熊猫非常感兴趣,于是你带他去了动物园。请以“At the zoo”为题,根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文,描述你们在动物园里的见闻。
提示：1. What animals are there at the zoo? 2. What are your favourite animals?
3. Why do you like them?
要求：1. 包含所有提示,可适当发挥；2. 词数：不少于60。
提示：1. What animals are there at the zoo? 2. What are your favourite animals?
3. Why do you like them?
要求：1. 包含所有提示,可适当发挥；2. 词数：不少于60。
答案：
[高分范文]
At the zoo
① It is Sunday morning. Jack and I go to the zoo. The zoo is far from my home, so we go there by bus.
② At the zoo, we see lots of animals,
③ such as tigers, lions, elephants and monkeys. Jack’s favourite animals are pandas, so we go to see the pandas first. The pandas are very cute. They eat bamboo every day. My favourite animals are monkeys. They are very clever. Then we go to see some other animals. We also watch an animal show at the zoo. It is very interesting.
④ In a word, we have fun there. We want to go there again.
[名师点评]
① 开篇点题,引出下文。
② 本段是文章的主体,介绍作者和朋友在动物园的见闻以及他们最喜爱的动物。
③ such as、so、then、also等词的灵活运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
④ 总结全文,表达感受。
At the zoo
① It is Sunday morning. Jack and I go to the zoo. The zoo is far from my home, so we go there by bus.
② At the zoo, we see lots of animals,
③ such as tigers, lions, elephants and monkeys. Jack’s favourite animals are pandas, so we go to see the pandas first. The pandas are very cute. They eat bamboo every day. My favourite animals are monkeys. They are very clever. Then we go to see some other animals. We also watch an animal show at the zoo. It is very interesting.
④ In a word, we have fun there. We want to go there again.
[名师点评]
① 开篇点题,引出下文。
② 本段是文章的主体,介绍作者和朋友在动物园的见闻以及他们最喜爱的动物。
③ such as、so、then、also等词的灵活运用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
④ 总结全文,表达感受。
假如你是陈飞,你的朋友玛丽(Mary)正在做关于动物的报告,她给你写了一封电子邮件,想要了解你的宠物。请你给她写一封回信。80词左右。
[思路点拨]
① 文体：应用文；
② 人称：以第一、三人称为主；
③ 时态：以一般现在时为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
[思路点拨]
① 文体：应用文；
② 人称：以第一、三人称为主；
③ 时态：以一般现在时为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Mary，
How are you? I'm fine here. I'll tell you something about my pet.
I have a pet dog. His name is Pipi. He has long black hair. He looks very lovely. I like him very much because he's friendly and loyal.
I spend much time with him. When I get home，he often greets me happily. I take him for a walk after supper every day. I feed him on some dog food. He likes to eat meat. I take a shower for him on the weekend. When I do my homework，he always sits beside me.
He is my good friend. I love him very much.
Yours，
Chen Fei
How are you? I'm fine here. I'll tell you something about my pet.
I have a pet dog. His name is Pipi. He has long black hair. He looks very lovely. I like him very much because he's friendly and loyal.
I spend much time with him. When I get home，he often greets me happily. I take him for a walk after supper every day. I feed him on some dog food. He likes to eat meat. I take a shower for him on the weekend. When I do my homework，he always sits beside me.
He is my good friend. I love him very much.
Yours，
Chen Fei
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案：
One possible version：
Dear Mary，
How are you? I'm fine here. I'll tell you something about my pet.
I have a pet dog. His name is Pipi. He has long black hair. He looks very lovely. I like him very much because he's friendly and loyal.
I spend much time with him. When I get home，he often greets me happily. I take him for a walk after supper every day. I feed him on some dog food. He likes to eat meat. I take a shower for him on the weekend. When I do my homework，he always sits beside me.
He is my good friend. I love him very much.
Yours，
Chen Fei
Dear Mary，
How are you? I'm fine here. I'll tell you something about my pet.
I have a pet dog. His name is Pipi. He has long black hair. He looks very lovely. I like him very much because he's friendly and loyal.
I spend much time with him. When I get home，he often greets me happily. I take him for a walk after supper every day. I feed him on some dog food. He likes to eat meat. I take a shower for him on the weekend. When I do my homework，he always sits beside me.
He is my good friend. I love him very much.
Yours，
Chen Fei
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