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Ⅹ.法国作家雨果曾说:“进步,才是人应该有的现象。”回首三年的初中时光,你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步,比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。
请写一篇短文谈一谈自己的进步。
要点：
1. 选取至少两个方面；
2. 结合自身经历,谈一谈过去与现在的不同；
3. 说明你是如何取得这些进步的。
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:used to do/be ..., try one’s best to do ... make progress in (doing)...
I Have Made Progress
Looking back on junior high school, I have made a lot of progress in my life. I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to take part in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I'm not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn't fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn't give up. I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and I also became more and more confident.
What great progress I have made!
请写一篇短文谈一谈自己的进步。
要点：
1. 选取至少两个方面；
2. 结合自身经历,谈一谈过去与现在的不同；
3. 说明你是如何取得这些进步的。
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于100,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:used to do/be ..., try one’s best to do ... make progress in (doing)...
I Have Made Progress
Looking back on junior high school, I have made a lot of progress in my life. I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to take part in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I'm not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn't fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn't give up. I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and I also became more and more confident.
What great progress I have made!
答案：
One possible version:
I Have Made Progress
Looking back on junior high school, I have made a lot of progress in my life. I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to take part in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I'm not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn't fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn't give up. I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and I also became more and more confident.
What great progress I have made!
I Have Made Progress
Looking back on junior high school, I have made a lot of progress in my life. I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to take part in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I'm not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn't fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn't give up. I kept on remembering new words, listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and I also became more and more confident.
What great progress I have made!
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