《2025年名师学案七年级英语上册人教版湖北专版》

<题目>假设你叫 Tom White,请根据以下图示向大家介绍一下你的家人,内容包括家庭成员的基本信息、性格、外貌、爱好等。

写作要点：
1. 爷爷 78 岁,喜欢和朋友下中国象棋；奶奶 75 岁,喜欢烹饪美味食物；
2. 妈妈善良,有时辅导我做作业；爸爸聪明强壮,篮球打得好；
3. 妹妹留着棕色的短发,喜欢动物。
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 70 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
第一步：写前审题
审题
体裁：记叙文
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：必备短语——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 一张我家人的漂亮的照片 a nice photo of my family
2. 下中国象棋 play Chinese chess
3. 不同种类 different kinds of
4. 辅导我做家庭作业 help me with my homework
5. 打篮球 play basketball
第三步：炼词成句——结合上一步中的短语和括号内提示完成句子
6. 这是一张我家人的漂亮的照片。(here is ...)Here is a nice photo of my family.
7. 他喜欢和他的朋友们一起下中国象棋。(like doing sth)He likes playing Chinese chess with his friends.
8. 她喜欢烹饪不同种美味的食物。(delicious food)She likes cooking different kinds of delicious foods.
9. 她有时辅导我做作业。(sometimes)She sometimes helps me with my homework.
10. 他篮球打得很好。(can)He can play basketball very well.
※名言添彩：
1. Like father,like son. 有其父必有其子。
2. There's no place like home. 千好万好,家里最好。
第四步：思路点拨

第五步：组句成篇——运用第三步中的句子及第四步思路点拨组成语段
My name is Tom white. I have a big family.Look! Here is a nice photo of my family. These are my grandparents Bob White and Rose White. My grandfather is 78. He likes playing Chinese chess with his friends. My grandmother is 75. She likes cooking different kinds of delicious foods. My grandparents often say I'm their favourite grandchild, but I think they say the same thing to all of their grandchildren. My mother Gina is on the left. She is kind. she sometimes helps me with my homework. On the right is my father David. He is clever and strong. He can play basketball very well. Who is the girl next to me? She is my sister, Linda White. She has short brown hair. She likes animals. I love my family!
写作评价：______

答案： 第一步：写前审题 记叙文 第三人称 一般现在时 第二步：必备短语 1. a nice photo of my family 2. play Chinese chess 3. different kinds of 4. help me with my homework 5. play basketball 第三步：炼词成句 6. Here is a nice photo of my family. 7. He likes playing Chinese chess with his friends. 8. She likes cooking different kinds of delicious foods. 9. She sometimes helps me with my homework. 10. He can play basketball very well. 第五步：组句成篇 My name is Tom white. I have a big family. Look! Here is a nice photo of my family. These are my grandparents Bob White and Rose White. My grandfather is 78. He likes playing Chinese chess with his friends. My grandmother is 75. She likes cooking different kinds of delicious foods. My grandparents often say I'm their favourite grandchild, but I think they say the same thing to all of their grandchildren. My mother Gina is on the left. She is kind. she sometimes helps me with my homework. On the right is my father David. He is clever and strong. He can play basketball very well. Who is the girl next to me? She is my sister, Linda White. She has short brown hair. She likes animals. I love my family!