《2025年名师学案七年级英语上册人教版湖北专版》

<题目>假设你是 Tom,请根据下面的图片提示简单介绍一下你的房间。

写作要求：
1. 词数 50 左右；
2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
参考词汇：被子 quilt；地板 floor
第一步：写前审题
审题
体裁：说明文
人称：第一人称和第三人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：必备短语——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 我的房间 my room
2. 在房间里 in the room
3. 在饭桌上 on the table
4. 一个足球 a football
5. 我的书包 my schoolbag
第三步：炼词成句——结合上一步中的短语和括号内提示完成句子
6. 这是我的房间。(this is...)This is my room.
7. 在房间里只有一张床,一个饭桌,一个书桌和一把椅子。(there be...)There is only a bed,a table,a desk and a chair in the room.
8. 一本书和一个闹钟在饭桌上。(...be...)A book and a clock are on the table.
9. 我有一个足球。(...have...)I have a football.
10. 我的书包在哪里？(where)Where is my schoolbag?
※名言添彩：
1. A place for everything and everything in its place. 万物有其所,各物在其处｡
2. A tidy house,a tidy mind. 整洁的房子,清净的心灵｡
第四步:思路点拨

第五步:组句成篇——运用第三步中的句子及第四步思路点拨组成语段My name's Tom. This is my room,a small but tidy one. A place for everything and everything in its place. There is only a bed,a table,a desk and a chair in the room. My quilt and my cap are on the bed. What colour is my quilt? It's blue. My cap is white. A book and a clock are on the table. Some books and a pencil box are on the desk. I have a football. It's under the chair. Where is my yellow schoolbag? It is on the floor. Everyone needs to keep tidy. I love my room very much.
写作评价：______

答案： 第一步：写前审题 体裁：说明文 人称：第一人称和第三人称 时态：一般现在时 第二步：必备短语——根据写作要点翻译短语 1. my room 2. in the room 3. on the table 4. a football 5. my schoolbag 第三步：炼词成句——结合上一步中的短语和括号内提示完成句子 6. This is my room. 7. There is only a bed,a table,a desk and a chair in the room. 8. A book and a clock are on the table. 9. I have a football. 10. Where is my schoolbag? 第五步:组句成篇 My name's Tom. This is my room,a small but tidy one. A place for everything and everything in its place. There is only a bed,a table,a desk and a chair in the room. My quilt and my cap are on the bed. What colour is my quilt? It's blue. My cap is white. A book and a clock are on the table. Some books and a pencil box are on the desk. I have a football. It's under the chair. Where is my yellow schoolbag? It is on the floor. Everyone needs to keep tidy. I love my room very much.