Dear Li Lan,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
How are you doing?
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing next week. Welcome to come here. I'll give you some suggestions on this traveling. Next week Beijing is going to be very hot. Sometimes the highest temperature is over 33℃. You'd better take a sun umbrella when you go out. As everyone knows, Beijing is a crowded city. And subway is one of the most convenient means of transportation in this city. So I advise you to take the subway to go around. Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, where I advise you to go. During your travel, don't throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public. Only in this way can you be a well-mannered tourist. I believe your trip will be full of fun and I hope you will have a good time in Beijing!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Li Lan,
How are you doing? I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing next week. Welcome to come here. I'll give you some suggestions on this traveling.
Next week Beijing is going to be very hot. Sometimes the highest temperature is over 33℃. You'd better take a sun umbrella when you go out. As everyone knows, Beijing is a crowded city. And subway is one of the most convenient means of transportation in this city. So I advise you to take the subway to go around. Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, where I advise you to go. During your travel, don't throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public. Only in this way can you be a well-mannered tourist.
I believe your trip will be full of fun and I hope you will have a good time in Beijing!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Lan,
How are you doing? I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing next week. Welcome to come here. I'll give you some suggestions on this traveling.
Next week Beijing is going to be very hot. Sometimes the highest temperature is over 33℃. You'd better take a sun umbrella when you go out. As everyone knows, Beijing is a crowded city. And subway is one of the most convenient means of transportation in this city. So I advise you to take the subway to go around. Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, where I advise you to go. During your travel, don't throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public. Only in this way can you be a well-mannered tourist.
I believe your trip will be full of fun and I hope you will have a good time in Beijing!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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