【写作任务】
假设你是李华,刚刚结束初中生活的第一周。你的英语老师要求你们周末写一篇作文,谈论你喜欢的新老师以及喜欢他/她的原因,并说说你在他/她的课上学到了什么。词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【妙笔成篇】
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假设你是李华,刚刚结束初中生活的第一周。你的英语老师要求你们周末写一篇作文,谈论你喜欢的新老师以及喜欢他/她的原因,并说说你在他/她的课上学到了什么。词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
【妙笔成篇】
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答案:
主要人称:第一人称、第三人称
教材句式迁移
1. That picture is from a history book, not from a Chinese book.
2. My mother tells me: you need to ask questions in class.
3. Her polite words make me feel sad.
4. I'm so happy to have a friend like her.
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version:
My first week of junior high is full of surprises, especially in Ms Chen’s English class. She is my favourite new teacher because she is lively and warm.
In the first class, Ms Chen doesn’t start with boring grammar rules. Instead, she plays a video of a famous English song. When I am afraid to share my answer, she smiles and says, “No answer is wrong in learning!” Her encouragement makes me feel confident.
In Ms Chen’s class, I know English is not just about words — it’s a tool to communicate and show ideas. Ms Chen always says, “Don’t be afraid to make mistakes.” Her patience and help make me fall in love with English. I’m excited to learn more in her classes!
教材句式迁移
1. That picture is from a history book, not from a Chinese book.
2. My mother tells me: you need to ask questions in class.
3. Her polite words make me feel sad.
4. I'm so happy to have a friend like her.
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version:
My first week of junior high is full of surprises, especially in Ms Chen’s English class. She is my favourite new teacher because she is lively and warm.
In the first class, Ms Chen doesn’t start with boring grammar rules. Instead, she plays a video of a famous English song. When I am afraid to share my answer, she smiles and says, “No answer is wrong in learning!” Her encouragement makes me feel confident.
In Ms Chen’s class, I know English is not just about words — it’s a tool to communicate and show ideas. Ms Chen always says, “Don’t be afraid to make mistakes.” Her patience and help make me fall in love with English. I’m excited to learn more in her classes!
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