《2025年名师学案七年级英语上册人教版》

本单元以“院子和农场的动植物”为话题,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群,涉及子主题“种植和养殖,热爱并善待生命”。此类作文要求学生能准确地介绍某个地方。在写作中,要学会使用“This is...”“You can see...”等句型进行写作。
【写作任务】
假设你的爷爷有一个农场,请以“On the farm”为题写一篇小短文,用上句型“This is...”“You can see...”“There is/are...”。
写作要求：
1. 词数 50 左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
第一步：写前审题
审题
体裁：说明文
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：必备短语——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 我爷爷的农场my grandpa's farm
2. 许多动物many animals
3. 有there be
4. 在农场on the farm
5. 在树的后面behind the tree
第三步：炼词成句——结合上一步中的短语和括号内提示完成句子
6. 这是我爷爷的农场。(this is...)This is my grandpa's farm.
7. 他在这里有许多动物。(have)He has many animals here.
8. 有九只鹅。(goose)There are nine geese.
9. 在农场有八只鸭子。(duck)There are eight ducks on the farm.
10. 另一只鸭子在那棵大树后面。(another)Another duck is behind the big tree.
※名言添彩：
1. A good farmer is known in bad weather. 好农夫在坏天气里也出名。
2. The farm is the place where nature and man meet. 农场是自然和人类相遇的地方。
第四步：思路点拨

第五步：组句成篇——运用第三步中的句子及第四步思路点拨组成语段
On the FarmThe farm is the place where nature and man meet. This is my grandpa's farm. It's very big. He has many animals here. Look at the ten cows on the farm. They are big. There are nine geese. Look! There are eight sheep. How many ducks does he have on the farm? Let me count. One, two, three, four... There are eight ducks on the farm. Oh, no, look there! Another duck is behind the big tree. Those are two horses and ten pigs. A dog is on the farm too. It's so cute. I like the beautiful farm.
写作评价：______

答案： 第一步：写前审题 体裁：说明文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 第二步：必备短语 1. my grandpa's farm 2. many animals 3. there be 4. on the farm 5. behind the tree 第三步：炼词成句 6. This is my grandpa's farm. 7. He has many animals here. 8. There are nine geese. 9. There are eight ducks on the farm. 10. Another duck is behind the big tree. 第五步：组句成篇 On the Farm The farm is the place where nature and man meet. This is my grandpa's farm. It's very big. He has many animals here. Look at the ten cows on the farm. They are big. There are nine geese. Look! There are eight sheep. How many ducks does he have on the farm? Let me count. One, two, three, four... There are eight ducks on the farm. Oh, no, look there! Another duck is behind the big tree. Those are two horses and ten pigs. A dog is on the farm too. It's so cute. I like the beautiful farm.