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| 优势：学校知名度高、注重实践、环境优雅 | 优势：优秀的教师团队、设备先进、学费较低 |
| 不足：费用高 | 不足：实践的机会不多 |
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1．字数120；
2．要点要全；开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
Yours，
Li Jin．
分析 本文是"表格+提纲类"形式，根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文，介绍就"是在国外读大学还是在国内读大学"这一问题的讨论形成的不同观点和看法．
写作要点：1．开头-引出话题；2．赞成在国外上大学观点及依据；3．赞成在国内上大学观点及依据；4．自己的观点．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：hold a heated debate（进行一个热烈的讨论），go abroad（出国），prefer to（更喜欢），domestic colleges（国内大学），as far as sb be concerned（就某人所关注的而言），get over sth（克服某事），the obstacle of（…的障碍），the expense of （…的费用），be advanced（先进的），the chances to do sth（做某事的机会）．
【高分句型一】
1．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．
此处是连接词"whether"引导的宾语从句，主句为"Our class has held a heated debate"．
【高分句型二】
2．Some students think①that ②studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．
①此处是由连接词"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"Some students think"．
②此处为动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数形式．
【高分句型三】
3．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．
此处是由连词"although"引导的让步状语从句，主句为"culture difference is a big problem"．
【高分句型四】
4．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．
此处是由不定式短语"To study abroad"作目的状语，主句为"you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits"．
解答 Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（开头-引出话题）
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反双方论述各自的利弊）
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己观点）
Yours，
Li Jin．
点评 写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
