《2026年一遍过八年级英语上册冀教版》

四、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2024 河北中考改编]假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
注意：(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名和校名；
(2)词数 70 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。


Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and _______
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答案：
写作思路
主题 人与自我——评价同学课堂表现并提出学习建议
语篇类型 应用文
时态与人称 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时 人称：第二人称
要点 1.简单评价张军的课堂表现
2.针对张军需要改进的两个方面提出建议
3.表达对张军的鼓励

单元主题写作
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and were active in answering questions. You also worked very well in your group. That’s really good. However, you didn’t ask any questions in class. You didn’t take notes, either. So you need to get improved. I mean, you should try to ask questions in class. That will make you think more deeply. Take notes when necessary, especially the key points. They’re helpful when you meet problems after class. You know, good learners know the best way of learning. Try harder!