《2025年基础训练大象出版社九年级英语全一册人教版》

四、书面表达。
Jack以前在学习上不愿下功夫,学习成绩也不理想。最近在朋友John的帮助下,他的学习有了明显进步。请根据下表中的提示信息写一篇英语短文。

要求：
1. 应包括以上所有要点,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥；
2. 自己对这一问题的看法；
3. 词数100左右。Jack is a student at No. 2 Middle School. He used to be late for school. What's worse, he didn't listen to the teachers carefully in class and he seldom finished his homework on time. His teachers and classmates were very worried about him. John, a top student in the class, decided to do something to help him.
John cared about Jack and talked with him every afternoon after school. He did his homework at Jack's home so that he could help Jack with his problems and help him review his lessons. At the end of the school year, Jack made great progress. Now, with the help of John, Jack is better at his lessons.
I think Jack is really lucky. He gets true friendship and good grades at the same time.

答案： 【思路点拨】该篇作文以成长变化为背景,讲述Jack在John的帮助下学习方面发生了很大变化。写作时,应首先根据提示信息讲述Jack过去存在的问题;然后,重点描述John对Jack的具体帮助;最后,介绍Jack发生的变化和自己对此事的看法或感悟。注意使用连接词和过渡语,使文章语言连贯。
【范文示例】
Jack is a student at No. 2 Middle School. He used to be late for school. What's worse, he didn't listen to the teachers carefully in class and he seldom finished his homework on time. His teachers and classmates were very worried about him. John, a top student in the class, decided to do something to help him.
John cared about Jack and talked with him every afternoon after school. He did his homework at Jack's home so that he could help Jack with his problems and help him review his lessons. At the end of the school year, Jack made great progress. Now, with the help of John, Jack is better at his lessons.
I think Jack is really lucky. He gets true friendship and good grades at the same time.