《2025年新编基础训练九年级英语全一册人教版》

假如Jim是你的好朋友,在最近几年里,他发生了很大的变化。请你结合下面所给的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍一下他的变化。

【思路点拨】
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 人称：第三人称
3. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
4. 写作要点：

①开篇点题,一目了然。
②used to 句式的使用显示出作者较高的写作水平。
③运用连词but对比具体的不同,衔接自然。
④运用“All of us love...”表达对他变化的喜爱之情,自然得体。

答案： Jim has changed a lot in the past few years. He used to be a thin and short boy, but now he is tall and strong. He used to be very shy and quiet, but now he is brave and outgoing. He isn't afraid of speaking in public anymore. He used to like playing games or watching TV at home in his free time, but now he likes reading and doing sports. He is good at playing football.
He is popular among us now. All of us love him.

假如你是李磊,原来是一个有很多坏习惯的少年,后来在同学们的帮助下有了很大的改变。请根据表格提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己有哪些改变,可适当发挥。词数80左右。

Hello! My name is Li Lei. I have changed a lot with the help of my classmates.
I used to be a student who liked making trouble. I used to get up late and was often late for school. But now I get up early and get to school on time. I read English every morning. I used to talk with others in class. I didn't use to listen to the teachers carefully. But now I'm very careful in class and I take a lot of notes. In the evening, I used to watch TV. But now I do my homework carefully. When I have problems, I ask my parents for help. I used to be impolite to my classmates, but now I'm friendly and I get on well with them. And I'm glad to help people who are in trouble.
I'm happy to see these changes and I hope I will make more progress in the future.

答案： One possible version:
Hello! My name is Li Lei. I have changed a lot with the help of my classmates.
I used to be a student who liked making trouble. I used to get up late and was often late for school. But now I get up early and get to school on time. I read English every morning. I used to talk with others in class. I didn't use to listen to the teachers carefully. But now I'm very careful in class and I take a lot of notes. In the evening, I used to watch TV. But now I do my homework carefully. When I have problems, I ask my parents for help. I used to be impolite to my classmates, but now I'm friendly and I get on well with them. And I'm glad to help people who are in trouble.
I'm happy to see these changes and I hope I will make more progress in the future.